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Ah, I misunderstood. It starts out with the protagonist ending up in a relationship with Fluttershy. Rarity is the first where the friendship begins to evolve into something more and more women start coming into the picture over time. Some of my favorite romantic dynamics to write are Smolder, Ember, and Novo.
hmm, to be honest that isn’t any more specific or helpful than the TV Tropes page, i was more hoping for character names.
i just like knowing what exactly i’m going to spend the next few weeks reading without any unwanted surprises, as not every ship is everyone’s cup of tea.
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Character deaths happen rarely, but the few that happen are dramatic and meaningful. The romantic relations with the protagonist starts off monogamous, but very slowly and carefully starts to lean into a polyamorous situation that I am taking very seriously and handling as carefully as possible. Sex scenes are a given, but are not at all the focus of the story.
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can you give a quick run down on what’s going to happen in the story? not in terms of the actual plot, but in terms of the “tags”, like who’s shipping who, if there’s death, sex, fetishes, etc. stuff like that.
so that people know exactly what to expect with minimal plot spoilers
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It gets much better later. If you can get by the first 13 chapters, you won’t regret it.
Now I’m about to try again.
See what led to this point.
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Oh well then I understand
I didn’t know you had done that but I won’t lie I don’t pay attention
to many things these days so its my fault, sorry :(
That’s not going to happen. It would require extensive rewriting and I just do not have the time or incentive for that. I’ve revised and edited the first volume as much as I can, but that’s the best I can do and I wish more people would understand that. You can’t always get what you want.
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Ah that makes sense
Maybe there will be a remake of those chapters:3
The problem is that it was written ten years ago. Less experienced and less polished.
Whats wrong with it in your opinion?
I couldn’t get through the first parts of the story without going “seriously!?”
Sadly, I may never reach this point.
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yup!
ohh! thank you for telling me! :)
More like last night. The chapter has been up for less than a day.
oh my~
Soon. Very soon.
Thank you! :)
Right here.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/47607/the-lost-element
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Is there a link to this story? Just wondering since it sounds interesting!