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I’m a bit disappointed. I wish I hadn’t read this page now because it retroactively made the previous ones less hot. I can still hold out hope for a digestive ending though!
Rest in peace english language.
Could always just open paint and paint white over the dialogue bubbles and make him say that he digests them. Works fine for me since there’s really no proof in that they don’t digest in the actual images so far to prove they’re alive other that he say it in the dialogues
I’ve been wondering the same as it was never stated explicitly whether everyone was being digested or not because every comic after would show the bulge gone. On one hand it’s nice to finally have a reason given, but on the other hand I kind of would have preferred a digestion.
the answer’s magic isn’t it?
Somehow I think Natsume just went with whatever dialogue the commissioner suggested, either without fully understanding potential mistakes due to his own limited english, or just doing it as instructed without question.
I only say that because there’s someone in his comments section that’s practically talking like Discord in this page, so I’d put bets on him being the commissioner.
Guess he set it for the comic to not have digestion from the looks of the page, which is a shame. I want to see hawt discord on anime pony action before eating and digesting them.
I’m not bothered with the construction of the dialogue because i’m too busy getting upset about all the typos.
Yes, i know the artist doesn’t have english as their native language but stil. I stopped following natsumemetalsonic because the poor grammar in the dialogue drew me away from the hot stuff going on. These days i just re-write the dialogues myself though and keep the edits saved
Well I mean specifically the dialogue as far as quality is concerned. Yeah, the original had no story at all, but now… everything Discord is saying is incredibly telly, rather than the puns and stuff he was dribbling last time. As a writer, it reads in a really annoying way for me.
Another commissioner picked it up and he sets his rules/cannon in this 1st page. And i don’t get what you mean by “go down in quality”? Art quality is the same if not better and old one had no story at all so what?
Sound fun- and something to fap furiously to! XD Still i love how the girls are drawn, if nothing else they look nice! And there is one thing i’m waiting for now, and i hope it will be done sexy and for a long time - Luna being eaten. Mmmm… :)
I think about that, and concluded that he maybe digest there clothes before let them out. So… Let’s wait :3