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It’s my first time animating a cumming sequence (and cum) so pls be gentle with me.
 
Will be uploading a gif version of this and the fucking-loop-version with added CM later as well c:

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Evomanaphy
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@Echo Bounce  
Heya, thank you for the feedback!  
I do indeed have no experience with animating a cumming sequence so I really appreciate your feedback so I can hopefully improve in the future :D
 
For the RD reaction part, she only starts reacting as soon as he fastly trusts into her, first she’s surprised because the movement is so sudden compared to his movement during the what I call loop-part and then she’s just cumming herself. So her reaction only starts as soon as the cumming sequence itself starts, you should be able to see that a bit better if you slow the animation down or look at the individual frames, but I can understand what you mean since his hard trust starts one frame before his hoof starts touching her butt and it might look a bit desychronized due to that.
 
and on the more pumping, I actually had it originally like that in my first drafts, having him pump a little more before the cum appears but it didn’t fit with the expressions I had planned and would’ve meant to add more additional frames which in the end I didn’t do because I also had to rework RD’s whole face and expressions during the cumming sequence because I was really not happy with how they were before.  
And since the cumming sequence itself was pretty much just a bonus for the AB option (it was originally only to be the loop part) I just ended up leaving it the way it is now. Mostly because I didn’t want the “bonus” sequence to outnumber the main sequence when it comes to the total number of frames ^^;  
That should give a little insight on my thought process on these things!
 
otherwise I’ll see how I can improve everything on the next animation I’ll be working on!So thank you very much again for the constructive feedback it’s much appreciated! I’ll especially try to work on my timing the next time.
 
Hope you have a great week!
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The Butt Connoisseur
@Echo Bounce  
I was about to comment this exact thing but less in-depth XD Thank you for wording it better than I would!
 
I would also add that the last couple frame(s) come off as odd, as it seems like all the cum from orgasm that was leaking out has just disappeared, and not that feels inaccurate and unsatisfying as a final frame. Keep the mess!
Soarin'_Skies
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this animation is great, i love the drawing style! I’m so glad this finally got released 3  
but, to give some constructive criticism… the orgasm itself feels too fast. They where fucking, and then- BAM! it just suddenly happened, cum instantly poured out instead of taking one or two pumps first, and ended just 1 second later.
 
The orgasm itself just needs to last longer, and the cum start leaking out after the stallion has started cumming. Then the animation would be absolutely perfect!
 
(weeelll, looking back on it one more time, it seems like rainbow started reacting before his hoof even got there. that’s also a bit distracting)
 
but seriously, i love this animation, don’t get me wrong. and i am not an artist. but i did see that this is your first time animating something like this, so i just wanted to help and point out the few flaws that are there. Please keep animating stuff like this! it’s awesome <3
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One of the things that made the other one so great was that it had what we call a perfect loop. The last frame is identical to the first frame, so the looped animation doesn’t have an obvious start/end point.
 
With something this short, it’s a little distracting to see the abrupt shift between RD’s afterglow face at the end (which is great btw) and her starting expression. Maybe add a few more frames onto the end so the loop flows smoother.
 
Other than that little detail, 10/10. :)