@KyoM  
Amazing I wanted to idea?!

@Cloppersbr  
Actually yes!! That’s the plan!

@KyoM  
Part 2 in 2019?!

@DAPLR  

 
ikr? It should totally say ‘Guest Starring Rarijack!’ in the description at least.

Pinkie is a generous lover.

@KyoM  
I shall, and thank you for providing the fun art!

@Daneasaur
 
*Refuses to read the captions/description and for some reason not read from left to right like all other comics and their mother.
 
*Blames someone else for the personal fault of not following the story!!!

@Daneasaur  
Ah yes, the easy thing would be to add arrows although after thinking on it, there were some other ways I could have done it better. But not all pages will be perfect thats just how it can go with time constraints. Thanks for the critique, I will keep an eye on it in the future. Just keep an open mind! ^_

@KyoM  
The easiest way would be to include small numbers in the panels or arrows indication the direction the scenes are flowing. Though the idea that it’s a commission explains a lot of the questions I had.
 
 
@DAPLR  
The layout lead me to question if I needed to read the bottom grid of panels up and down, left to right, or some mishmash. With this much on one page, it becomes hard to tell what is going on in what order, especially since rarity popped out of nowhere and aj SUDDENLY turned around.
 
But as I said, now that i know this was a commission, I see where the flaws come from.

NEEEEEED PART 2!!!!!

@KyoM  
Actually… Never mind it’s not important…

@Daneasaur  
Although if you know of another to lay the page out better without removing what going on in this page, I would be more than happy to see it so that I can improve the next time I run across this issue of space and content.

@Daneasaur  
No, this is an example of trying to fit all of what the commissioner wanted in a set number of pages while still keeping the story to a certain pace. And this one isn’t too bad considering a page that will be coming down the line…now that one is really going to rustle your jimmies. Even I will admit that but the commissioner liked it and that’s all that matters.
 
It reads left to right, panel one “ butt action” reads up then down, panel 2 climax, panel 3 is confusing..read it all the way down to the end of Pinkie’s pie on the bed.
 
Row 2 starts with AJ and read left to right and goes on from there.
 
I hope that helps but that you just enjoy it for what it is a porn comic.

@Daneasaur  
Dude, why are you even asking? It’s porn for crying out loud, that’s what it is, that’s the goal. And the comic layout isn’t THAT bad, I’ve seen far worse.

I’m rather puzzled as to the goal of this comic or what kind of story it’s trying to tell. No joke.

This is 101 on how NOT to order/layout your comic panels. Seriously, i can’t tell what order I’m supposed to read any of these in.

Not tagged Rarijack? What the actual fuck….

My favorite ship pegged sissy spike… this comic is getting better and better.

That…was unexpected. Oh well, on to the others.