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Wellwater
Magnificent Metadata Maniac - #1 Assistant
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -

Just a flurry of H₂O
Celly’s strategy for waking her former student/usurper/hero up is definitely a bit strange. “She just fought a shapeshifter who looked like me, whom she had good reason to trust, so I’m going to shapeshift myself to look like someone else she has reason to trust! Nothing could possibly go wrong with this plan!”
 
And, indeed, nothing does, because reasons.
KnightMysterio

This? This is a sweet little page, and could possibly function as a standalone, given a bit of context and a few more panels.
 
However, as an end to a comic, this is confusing, frustrating, and annoying. I’m sorry, but I just don’t like it. Nothing about End of a Generation seemed good to me.
James739
Duck - I quack, therefore I am.

@Ms. Harshwhinny  
now that, THAT is the nicest thing you ever said to anyone in very comment you said
 
@Background Pony #7B77  
if you wish to discus it then fell free to share, I didn’t make any specific points because most of them are obvious, and I don’t take offence to being called Daffy because my friends often compare him to me
James739
Duck - I quack, therefore I am.

@Jarkes  
the problem is it a pointless story that adds up to nothing with a meaningless morel, unresolved plots and OOC characters that are just painful to watch and read, I’m not dissing the guy, he a great artiste but this is just rubbish
Jarkes
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2018) - Celebrated Derpibooru's six year anniversary with friends.
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2017) - Celebrated Derpibooru's five year anniversary with friends.
Thread Starter - Transformers Thread

GOKAAAAI... SILVER!
Also, I’ve spoken with Beavernator about this, and he’s stated that in hindsight, the “gray morality” thing was a poor choice of words on his part; his intention for the story was more just something darker than what you’d see on the show. And I’d say that he probably DID succeed on that front.
Jarkes
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2018) - Celebrated Derpibooru's six year anniversary with friends.
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2017) - Celebrated Derpibooru's five year anniversary with friends.
Thread Starter - Transformers Thread

GOKAAAAI... SILVER!
@Twilestia
 
Even the artist has admitted that the pacing of this story is horrible. And he appreciates the honest criticism people are giving him.
Background Pony #F852
“We are told things are bad, threats of war breaking out, ponies dissatisfied.” to add to that: But we are not shown anything.
Twilestia
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Betrayal! - Betrayed their team for a badge. Shame forever!
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Primo Victoria
Now that i looked at it all, im just as confused as i was at the start. Just feels out of the blue, rushing from one action/important scene to the other without any real transition or taking time for things to sink in and get some importance.
 
We are told things are bad, threats of war breaking out, ponies dissatisfied. Dont know about others but at least i couldn’t really get into it.
 
But hey the artwork is good and the hug at the end is cute.
Millennial Dan
Artist -

@441TheSecond  
I don’t think that’s quite it. Most dA users are pretty young (for some insane reason), so by and large they’re not up to the task of writing useful reviews. I’d rather have users like that leave fluffy, insubstantial comments than vainly attempt to sound smart. But certainly, polite and well thought-out observations are the best.
 
Also, Wheaton’s Law or whatever.
OptimusPrimevil
A Really Classy Artist - 250+ images under their artist tag
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
Artist -

6 whirls out of 5 wreckers!
 
the twists were ok but at least sunset knows she made a lot of wrong decisions (other heroes won’t even acknowledge that much).
 
so she and twilight the new rulers now?
441TheSecond
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Escapee from Alcatraz
@Background Pony #2B0A  
It really pisses me off that everybody in DA is showering it with praise.
 
It’s why it’s such a bad art website, everybody is too afraid of offending the artists’s precious feelings by saying that maybe everything that they create isn’t the spunk of Christ.
Background Pony #DA08
@441TheSecond  
Pretty much this; it feels more like something that should have been run through a writers’ group for constructive criticism as a stepping stone for publicly-released comics, rather than released publicly itself. Not an abomination, not proof Beavernator should never write a multipart comic again, but something that should be viewed as a learning experience.