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Rather write less and think more.
At least in those ones there were attempts at jokes. All of the ones this OP had were just scenarios that ended early.
OP, take my advice. Make those into fanfics and flesh them out, don’t just leave them as halfbaked texts
With that wall of text/ranting, I’d say you’re on your way. :P
Anyways, I still find some of them amusing, even if they aren’t the funniest thing in the universe. I don’t see what was so bad about “neutralize.” You seem to be the type with extremely high-standards for something being entertaining.
>>544013 makes no sense. “Neutralize”? Least funny leading word ever. >>539250 is only “cute” because Derpy, also makes no sense. >>544002 and >>544004 somehow manage to fail at portraying a comedic SIBLING relationship. Altogether this is nonmedy.
Specifically, by my use of “makes no sense”, I mean no attempt was done to “lead in”. None of these have a “setup” except one, and that one failed the setup so spectacularly the “punchline” wasn’t even a punchline.
E gads I’m criticizing “comedy”. What next? Losing all my hair, gaining enough weight to be four of me, and proclaiming “It stinks!”?
@Serenade_Acceso_Forza
I felt some earlier ones were kinda amusing/funny though personally.
>>544013 >>539250 >>544002 >>544004
Honestly, terrible, but I just wanted to somehow support your point using referencable material. It’s not that fucking hard to make SOME thing of a punchline. Christ. Again - I am impressed by the creatively lazy stupidity.
You have to give stupidity credit: Holistically its creativity for inanity has necessitated I have more tags blocked than allowed. In a more favorable scenario this would warrant an award.