@Thegreatmewtwo  
The closest species we have for Flutterponies.

@Puto-Chef  
Changelings, to stop the Smooze?

You have good light development starting. It looks like you have taken an art class, are perceptive, or learned by rigor. If you’ve never worked with charcoal before, I strongly recommend it. Adamantly. Still life studies are essential to understanding light, volume, etc.
 
Brings me to: Liquids. Defined contours and corners are antithetical to liquids. A liquid has these, but they MUST blend in to one another. A “stream” of bends (If you didn’t hate me before!).
 
To give you a study idea, this image.
 
Everything in one image. The detail is unnecessary.
 
Why all this? Each image you posted has this theme. I’m posting this to remind you to go beyond - and maybe give ideas as to how. If you care. Draw more. Art more. Dear God never forget to have fun with it either.
 
Otherwise all you’d get are a couple useless upvotes, maybe downvotes, and a fave from Roboshi. Yet I think, especially Roboshi, should remind you how marvelously big the play pen is.