She didn’t say a word, we both knew what I’d done wrong. She just towered over me and glared, teeth bared and visibly trembling like she was struggling to contain herself. Yet there was still this sense of building pressure, and that terrified me the most, I thought I was going to die.
constructive criticism is exactly the kind of thing I like to get. And I see what you mean, it needed to be a bit more angular I think, I’ll have to work on that if I do this kind of angle again.
the PoV is awesome for this expression, but I feel like her face is too round as it approaches her snout (just a bit of constructive criticism ^^ and still kudos for the great idea).