@redweasel  
Thanks a lot for the feedback, I really need to practice more.

her shoulders need to be more turned to match with her turning her head. she needs a teensy bit more belly than just vulva behind her. the uh… beads of lubrication are shaped more like worms than beads. draw a line down between her eyes, curving right until it follows the exact direction of her muzzle. each nostril should be equadistant from that line. wings, you draw stubby little chicken wings, and then three rows of feathers all attach to those stubs, fanning out as pinions (the long ones) secondaries (the less long ones) and some short squat ones in a third row. um… if her butt is pointing towards the camera, then anon’s butt shouldn’t be pointing away from it. they must have the same butt angle.
 
a lot of good stuff here that still needs some polish to put it all together. leg anatomy is great, her expression is lovely, her hair is well drawn. um… fluttershy has teal eyes, but the eyes look pretty nice otherwise.