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Random OC I put together. Hoping to commission an artist for this one.
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Thanks for the review, though I would like it if you try to keep any potential spoilers to hidden format.
Dude, that “bomb” is longer than the first Harry Potter book. But damn that Umbra cunt is well-written for a villain, in the matter of me wanting him dead within the first minute he showed up and only increasing from there on.
But damn do you know how to write drama and leave me hanging. I’ve got no clue if the next chapter’s biggest moment is gonna be Nondis grilling a fellow guard for mouthing off, or some characters being taken hostage/dying. I’ve experienced just about every aspect of emotion during this tumultuous story. It admittedly started as a case of “came for the clop (which took a while to find), stay for the story”. Now I just want Nondis to stop fucking with all those girls’ emotions and make a damn harem. But maybe I’m subconsciously greedy for the way you write lustful encounters. Honestly it was the same way with White Zinfandel.
Man I didn’t intend for this to turn into a full-blown review.
I’m actually surprised no one managed to catch on. I hope the Christmas bomb wasn’t too much to take in.