@Th3BlueRose
Thank you very much for your feedback. It actually isn’t Shining Armor wearing a Crash Bandicoot mask. It’s Crash Bandicoot inside of a Shining Armor costume so you’re right that my execution isn’t working very well. I’ll see what I can do to fix these issues for future parts.
@JAC59COL
Keep in mind that unfortunately people will downvote rather than hide tags, or just downvote for literally any reason. Though my guess would be the anatomy and the mask. The mask doesn’t exactly look like a mask, and more looks like Dwight from that CPR episode of the Office, so it comes off as creepy. Additionally Shiny’s head is a bit…small? He looks like a hunchback :s
I think the concept was good, but the execution didn’t portray it well ^^
Edit: I should mention that I do like your art and how you show the progress of your work, though this one seems a bit weird for the reasons I mentioned ^^
No problem! It makes more sense now that you’ve explained it but it still looks weird ^^ I hope you can fix it!
Thank you very much for your feedback. It actually isn’t Shining Armor wearing a Crash Bandicoot mask. It’s Crash Bandicoot inside of a Shining Armor costume so you’re right that my execution isn’t working very well. I’ll see what I can do to fix these issues for future parts.
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Keep in mind that unfortunately people will downvote rather than hide tags, or just downvote for literally any reason. Though my guess would be the anatomy and the mask. The mask doesn’t exactly look like a mask, and more looks like Dwight from that CPR episode of the Office, so it comes off as creepy. Additionally Shiny’s head is a bit…small? He looks like a hunchback :s
I think the concept was good, but the execution didn’t portray it well ^^
Edit: I should mention that I do like your art and how you show the progress of your work, though this one seems a bit weird for the reasons I mentioned ^^
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