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Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
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this is a test image, just a simple one
 
but what do you think is it good, what should i improve upon? what do you think i need?
 
leave a comment down bellow i’ll be happy to take your advice

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Mr100dragon100
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
A Really Hyper Artist - 500+ images under their artist tag
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
A Really Classy Artist - 250+ images under their artist tag
Artist -

reformation is the best
@redweasel  
hm ya i should i’m working on something and i should make a new folder for face expressions when i get to the other parts and when i feel like it’s needed, but that is for the furute i can’t change what i have now but i will learn.
 
also big heart?
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redweasel
Duck - "someone befriended them, saved them, coaxed them out of their shell, and showed them that sex is nothing to be afraid of. I’m kind of envious of that rape victim"

Fuzzbutt
you have a big heart. and yes you have improved.
 
you might work on mouths, drawing them in different ways open and closed and exaggerated, trying to get an idea of how they work.
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Mr100dragon100
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
A Really Hyper Artist - 500+ images under their artist tag
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
A Really Classy Artist - 250+ images under their artist tag
Artist -

reformation is the best
@Arcan  
well it’s probably the cloths but next time i’ll look at references when it comes to ponies and how they bend their arms in the show but thank you for your critic i appreciate it
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Arcan
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).

It looks very nice. I dont se anything that need “fixing”.  
The extra bent hoof she holds bits in maybe. But it look ok.
 
Honestly it looks good. you did improve the heads a lot!
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