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>”When we camped out in that building…” Wallflower starts.  
>”I saw her too…” She finishes, still looking out at the creature.  
>”Saw who?!” Moonie asks.  
>Everypony else in the room is looking at the two of you.  
>”She believes in us…” Wallflower’s gaze does not once move away from the window.  
>”Well…” You start.  
>”When I was traveling with these three we stopped at a house to rest, and while we were sleeping a pony came in, or at least she looked like a pony…”  
>Home Sick’s eyes widen.  
>”That wasn’t a dream?” She asks.  
>”You saw her too?” Paradise asks.  
>”No but I… I felt her, while I was sleeping. It was like someone draped a blanket over me on a cold night… it was nice.” Home Sick explains.  
>”Did she have green eyes?” Cipher asks.  
>”Even you have seen her?!” Moonie asks.  
>”I… I think so…” He says.  
>”After I got attacked by the zipper worm she guided me to where you guys found me. I thought I had hallucinated her…”  
>Something seems to suddenly dawn on Moonie, her eyes widen as her pupils dart side to side trying to figure out whatever her realization means.  
>”Do we need to find this mare?” asks Cipher  
>Moonie thinks a moment before speaking.  
>”No… We keep going towards the bell, I don’t think she would let us find her no matter how hard we looked.”  
>She opens the door to the front of the garage and steps outside.  
>You help Taku to her hooves as the others follow Moonie outside.  
>You gather outside.  
>”Where’s the green one?” Cipher asks.  
>One of the garage doors opens and Wallflower steps out from it and joins the rest of you.  
>She looks back as the creature rolls outside.  
>Some of it’s heads look at you and others look towards where the laughter went.  
>All heads look at you once more before retracting as the creature rolls off in the opposite direction.  
>”It just wanted to know what we were, nothing more… I think.” Wallflower says.  
>Everypony looks at one another, unsure as what to say about everything they just learned and saw.
 
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redweasel
Duck - "someone befriended them, saved them, coaxed them out of their shell, and showed them that sex is nothing to be afraid of. I’m kind of envious of that rape victim"

Fuzzbutt
it wasn’t too “on the nose” because they were talking about different creatures that they had already seen, the ones who couldn’t even survive a strategically placed tripwire. so that’s all that we thought there were. this is a third kind of creature, who isn’t trying to kill them, but isn’t entirely vulnerable and unintelligent. so it’s more like a revelation on top of a revelation.
Scraggleman
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Watch me swooce right in
Thank you, it was something I decided to do as I sort of felt the creature encounters had started feeling a bit uninteresting and decided to explore the idea of a creature with entirely different motives. I was actually intending to do it with an entirely different creature who’s intent was a very different. However looking at it now I think it may have been a bit “on the nose” to encounter this kind of creature just after they had a discussion about creatures they might be a threat to.
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Tennessee Hillbilly
A horror themed story where not all monsters are trying to eat you? Fascinating, Scraggleman. Keep up the good work, Hell, you might end up as a very successful writer with this creativity. Modern horror has gotten too predictable and dry.