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first time making a little comic would love to here some feed back
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+-SH suggestive192455 +-SH artist:vo-photoshop10 +-SH princess celestia113682 +-SH twilight sparkle360918 +-SH g42052501 +-SH abdominal bulge10040 +-SH accidental vore176 +-SH bed58969 +-SH book44215 +-SH comic136794 +-SH dialogue95411 +-SH female1827815 +-SH fetish58055 +-SH magic97863 +-SH pillow25949 +-SH princess vorestia575 +-SH soft vore1528 +-SH stomach noise5122 +-SH teleportation784 +-SH teleportation mishap39 +-SH televortation18 +-SH vore19424 +-SH vore comic13
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your not looking are you https://derpicdn.net/img/2015/2/26/837540/large.png
Thanks so much radpanic for the feed back!!!
The outline of Celestia’s belly doesn’t match up with her chest, so it looks like the belly just abruptly ends behind her foreleg. I’d suggest editing the chest to make it match.
And the dialogue needs punctuation.