@Pinkamena 314  
i’ll try remember this. though if you look through my tag, you’ll know i won’t stop with the bush pubes at least. it’s another thing i’m drawing stuff for because i can’t find enough of it.

You aren’t terrible at drawing, you show a lot of promise, but there are several fine details that could be improved on. The hands are a bit iffy, Lemon’s navel looks more like a small bite taken out of her belly, her tongue is slightly too long for a human, and her facial structure is a bit off. Her nose doesn’t look like a nose, and her jawline is more masculine than you probably intended. Also, most people on the internet aren’t that fond of pubes that could be described as a ‘bush’, and the nearly nonexistent background doesn’t help. The good sides? I love their body styles, especially Lemon’s, and her penis is perfectly drawn and proportioned - and I love the ‘premise’, as you put it. =P Keep up drawing, work on your details, and ignore the haters - those guys are pretty much the background radiation of the internet.