Fanfic Writing General

@Background Pony #7418  
All other water is affected just like the oceans

@Cyborg  
And the next disaster??

@Background Pony #7418  
The next one is the dust still inside the sun causes the temperature to rise greatly, though the marks also protect against this
 
Without much available water, many more die

@Cyborg  
Ooh.

@Background Pony #7418  
Next one is where the dust evolves, to block the sun and make it seem like night, when it’s still day  
And to give pain to whoever is inside, unless they have the mark

@Cyborg  
Whoa.

@Background Pony #7418  
Hey, slight change to the story

@Cyborg  
Ok, then. What’s the slight change??

@Background Pony #7418  
I’ve decided to scrap the disaster idea and replace it with a different disaster

@Cyborg  
Ok, then. What is it?????

@Background Pony #7418  
Deep underground, the core of the planet is beginning to crumble inward

@Cyborg  
Ooh.

could i post my concept for my chapter 3 here when I’m ready with it because I need advice here because I don’t want to reveal spoilers on deviant art

@Background Pony #7418  
Hey, I got another new idea

@Cyborg  
Tell me the idea.

does anyone else comment here? i would like advice please once I finish my concept story for chapter 3

@Mr100dragon100  
Well, i think you should consider getting a beta reader and editor.

@Background Pony #DB6A  
what’s that?

@Mr100dragon100  
Beta reader: Test reader of an unreleased work.

@Background Pony #DB6A  
Or literature.
 
As for proof reader: someone who finds and corrects errors in your story.
 
(i was meant to say proof reader, but i had a brainfart)

@Background Pony #DB6A  
i’ll see becuase what i want to post is a concept not the final product

@Mr100dragon100  
Good luck.  
@Cyborg  
Ready to hear the idea.

@Background Pony #DB6A  
You still there

@Cyborg  
Yeah.

@Background Pony #DB6A  
Ready for the idea