[SFW] Artist's Group Chat

@Toyminator900  
Only thing that immediately catches my eye is, ironically, the eyes.
 
The right [her left] iris and pupil are smaller than the other. While forced perspective may make something further/closer smaller/larger in size, character eyes are too close together for that to have a large noticeable effect.
 
My thought to improve it would be to just increase the size of that iris and pupil. To about the same size as the one on the left [her right] Or slightly smaller. And by slightly, I mean like barely a line’s width. Super subtle~

@Zeb  
Eyes are always my problem, I’ll see what I can do.

@Toyminator900  
I recommend using this technique. Its helped me a lot with my eyes.  

@Zharkaer
 
I’m totes triggered right now ugh!

Any better?  
BEFORE  

 
AFTER  

Hi there! I would like to share this drawing I’ve just done.  

@Toyminator900  
Eye size looks better. But I think the large catchlight is off. The eye on our left has the large catchlight sort of towards the right of the iris. While the eye on our right has the catchlight more towards the left.
 
@Alvh-Omega  
Ha~ Cute~

@Zeb  
Like this?  

@Toyminator900  
Yeah man, there ya go~

@Alvh-Omega  
I really like that! I love the eyes and the thick outlines, really gives it a retro kind of feel, imo.
 
I keep thinking I should participate in the threads a little more, so I guess I’ll throw this in here
 
>>1434823t (deleted)
 
I know people have strong feelings about this pairing, and Flash himself, and that’s fine. I was really inspired by a Miraculous Ladybug fanart and wanted to try something similar. I wish I could have captured the simple elegance of the original image, but was a fun change in pace.

@40kponyguy  
@RoygbivThePony  
I’m with Roygbiv. I don’t see the G3 resemblance at all.
 
@Alvh-Omega  
I think that she looks great doing the Rosie the Riveter pose. The star eyes are nice.

Thanks for the comments! I appreciate it.
 
Also, my last contribution to a drawthread.  

 
PD. I ship Sunset with Twilight, not very original I know but well.  
I like the color’s election, only black and white with blue eyes.

I think it’s just the face shape/expression that’s doing it. I know the overall design is completely different.
 

@Alvh-Omega  
Cute. Nice work.

@Alvh-Omega  

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Hehe  
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Ok, well now what can I add (besides a background) to this? Or more like, what can I fix?  

@Toyminator900  
I think the head need to be more round c: and less oval shaped

@RoygbivThePony  
Unfortunately, I don’t know if there’s an option to fix that, like maybe I’d know, but I don’t think I can fix that on my mobile version of AutoDesk Sketcher…

Yo :3  

Just some OC stuff~
 

 
And a pinkiecorn. _{^{couldn’t be arsed to draw a background for this one}}
 

 
@Toyminator900  
I think the ear should be placed more towards the back of the head, it seems to be too close to the eye now.

@Toyminator900  
Okay, I’ll start by agreeing with PaskaNaakka there. The ear needs moving back. It’s almost directly over her eye there and just looks odd.
 
On a second note, you may want to give her more of a butt. Doesn’t look ‘curvy’ enough really there. Her right leg, (our left) also looks slightly narrower than her other leg, despite it being nearer to us.
 
About all I can see at the moment. Hope that helps.

@40kponyguy  
@PaskaNaakka  
Like move the ear to the left?
 
Hmm, I guess I’ll try to.

@PaskaNaakka  
Still love your style. <3
 
Also, unrelated.
 

@LightningBolt  
I also love his style, not to mention, Swirl’s pudginess.

@LightningBolt  
Thank
 
^{I quite like yours too, the whole emo/goth/whateverthefuck aesthetic just works on ponies in a weird way}
 
 
@Toyminator900  
Something tells me you like pudgy ponies

@PaskaNaakka  
Ohh what gave it away?  
_{And yeah, I agree.}