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From what I can piece together these “nobles” were showing off their power levels (“orbits?”) and some of the local kids were too close and it messed up their own magic, which causes physical and emotional pain in this universe.
Background Pony #DFD3
Is it messed up that I kinda want to know exactly what happened to sweetie & how she was abused?  
(The answers yes isn’t 😓😅)
AnarchyZebra

I am honestly kinda noticing something here at least with this Rarity area and it is sad. It kinda feels like the pacing of the pages is off. It feels like alot of the content between what is going on between pages are huge jumps without feeling like they flow into one another naturally. Up until now they have been okay with that and it didn’t take away from the story. But for some reason this seems to have become a thing with Rarity and her section. I really REALLY love the art and the story as well. But this chapter did kinda feel like a large jump. I will keep reading as I love the story and art and look forward to every update I see.
Ltmajordude
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition

Went from “The most beautiful unicorn in the world…” to “Somepony’s gonna die and there won’t be enough stitches in Hell to put them back together~”
 
I know this is called Cold Blooded Twilight but I’m honestly more interested in Spike.
Starswirl
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
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The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Too bad. I think the comic looks interesting, but I’m also tired of story lines that rely on using some vague ‘nobles’ as two-dimensional cookie-cutter hate sinks. Since it looks like this comic is going to be built on it, I doubt reading on is going to be much of a satisfying experience.
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Pinkie, at some point in the future: “And that’s how the Brotherhood of Eunuchorns was made!”