@Background Pony #E32A  
hmmm…i think you are right, i notice now what you are saying.  
need to pay more attention to this things next time.  
and for the light yeah, probably i exaggerated with that.  
i wanted to do something like “sunset” light but, didn’t work too well it seems ^^;  
aaaanyway, i appreciate your comment a lot!  
will try to do better with next works

@Splitter Pic  
I think it’s how you draw the mouth. In most other depictions of Nyama that I’ve seen (including your previous one with Nyama’s face), the blue and white parts on his face are split so that the dividing line between them lines up perfectly with his mouth. This doesn’t look like that though, that dividing line seems to be like a whole pony head’s height over his lips, which makes it extra weird to try and imagine him closing his mouth the way he’s drawn here. The lighting could also be too strong, everything kinda looks like it’s stained with dust.

@passy  
don’t know ^^;  
sure a comment can help to understand, just to know if something is wrong or not well done, so i can understand and improve

Uhh. Why does this have so many downvotes?