cool……..I guess

The animation’s a little stiff, but it looks promising. I would suggest adding a bit more variation in motions, it feels a little mechanical. Also, try mixing up the sounds a bit more, I know for some people acquiring sounds can be tough, maybe try altering the pitch here and there slightly?
 
For a first animation, this is absolutely excellently well done.  
Just have fun with it :P
 
@Mihay  
You’re really not sorry for the joke XD  
But then, I wouldn’t be either… or maybe you are and I just like puns a little more than you.

First attempt? Forget all the haters in the comments, it’s fluid and not glitchy. Ten outta ten for a first try in my book.

@Gamer_Shy  
Whoa, calm down there. I was simply pointing out that there are a lot of animations like this. I wasn’t trying to be rude, I even complimented the guy, telling him he’s doing well. I’m not here to cause problems, just trying to have a civil conversation.

This looks really great! Amazing for your first try, too. I look forward to seeing your future animations!

Big vore fan here. This is an alright first attempt; there’s potential but work has to be done. My biggest beef is that, at the end, there is no throat bulge. That’s a pretty big part of the appeal of vore for many people (bulges,) so I suggest adding that on. Same goes for if you ever do a shot of the stomach from the outside; people love big bellies.
 
I’m not an animator, so I can’t give any specific tips on how to improve fluidity, for example. I hope this helps regardless. Keep on it my friend. As I said, this is an alright first attempt. All artists start somewhere!

@JJMDude  
Whether you care or not, treating people like garbage over not liking the work they’ve done is a good way to get yourself banned.

@JJMDude  
Are you paid enough to be reported for harassment?

@emu34b  
No, why would I?
 
Also, I’m not paid enough to care…

@JJMDude  
Is it really necessary to be that rude? Did you even read that it was their first? Jesus man.

@JJMDude
 
@Echo the Floof  
I’m sorry, but you two are rude as hell. This IS an animator’s first attempt, as stated by her literally right between your damn comments. They’re practicing, and showing their efforts. Rather than bash the artist and ruin their self esteem, how about you provide some constructive criticism, hm? Give advice on how to improve.

@ÜberReaktor  
Already offered them my help. Imma teach her my knowledge.

Well, it’s somewhat going the right direction.  
Though some improvements can be made (especially on the tongue animation, it looks stiff as a board), it has some sorta quality.  
And maybe extend the animation, perhaps with an internal scene of the Prey going down the gullet and dropping in the stomach.  
If they were still up, I’d direct you to MihayNoms vids for reference.  
But hey, keep up the work and keep improving, and you might make it sorta big one day.

@Mihay  
I suppose it’s turned into quantity over quality now. Here’s hoping it doesn’t stay like that.

@Echo the Floof  
I used to do this type of content, but I stopped because it was unappreciated. Too many people create basic stuff that has no affort. And sadly exactly THAT gets a high attention most of the time.
 
As for Floral, I’m sure they will improve. We just need to let the blossom bloom (sorry for that joke).

@JJMDude  
I have to agree. I won’t say this one is so bad, if it’s OP’s first try, but the amount of cookie cutter videos is a little over the top at this point. I’d honestly love to see some high quality vore SFM creators turn this whole cliche around.
 
As for OP, you’re doing great. Everyone has to start somewhere, just don’t follow blindly with what everyone else is doing, try to find your own style. If you put the work in, I think you could do really well.

@JJMDude  
I do am sorry. I just do learn now.