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This is my OC: Blue Raptor. He’s just an inventor from Ponyville, nothing special. I cant figure out how to delete uploaded pictures, so just ignore the last one. Tell me what you think of him in the comments, please!
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Blue Raptor invents robots and minor gadgets, like lockpicks and smoke bombs. He does hos experiments fairly well, for a citizen of Ponyville. His Cutie Mark if a Bolt of Lightning, which represents electricity.
It’s good to see that you listened though, and changed his background, but unfortunately you’ve gone from one extreme to the other. We know practically nothing now. I mean, he’s an inventor now, but what does he invent? How well does he do in his experiments? What is there to him that makes us think, ‘Yes, I want to see more of this character?’
I suggest you go and think carefully about this character and his life, and try to strike that balance between uninteresting and super-awesome.
Appearance-wise, the colours are a bit too intense; makes it kinda hard to look at him. I’d suggest toning them down a bit. Also, what’s his cutie mark?