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Description

Hello, everypony! This is Blue Raptor, my OC! He grew up in Saddle Arabia, where he trained to become a Royal Guard. When he left for Ponyville, he mastered over 20 forms of Martial Arts, became an incredibly skilled Acrobat (sadly, he cant fly), able to lift three times his body weight, fluent in over 30 languages, and able to lift three times his bodyweight. He also has a Genius Intellect, making him a master at Tactics and recognizing patterns. Don’t tell anypony, but he secretly has a crush on Applejack. Tell me what you think of him in the comments, please!

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RapidMapper

The mane and tail don’t match in style, the coat is too bold and vibrant for a standard pony, the cutie mark doesn’t match the color scheme, you forgot to explain why he can’t fly even though he has wings, and you mentioned twice that he can lift three times his weight, the capitalization in the description is all over the place all over the place (although your grammar seems to be alright, overall), the picture quality is poor at best, and as others have stated, you seem to have aptly described a Gary Stu.  
I do not like this character.
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@Supermane  
Well. That description is just crying out ‘Look at how awesome I am! SEE THE AWESOMENESS OF THIS OC?!’ which would lead people to think you’re mocking this kind of OC.
 
But… if you’re serious… hoo boy.