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I posted something with a error in it.so i’m posting this one.sorry for the inconvenience.i just want to make it right.  
(i add new dialog)and swap some stuff around.)I wish i could get rid of the other comic but you need a admin.  
(sorry for the repost.)

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mellow closingrain

wannabe artist
thank you.I kinda stopped with the comic.(at the moment)but there is an in between shot I added to flesh out the seen. I wish I can get rid of all of the other comic’s and start over again.I’m going to look up color theory.to get a better under standing of coloring.  
thank you for your helpful comment.
redweasel
Duck - "someone befriended them, saved them, coaxed them out of their shell, and showed them that sex is nothing to be afraid of. I’m kind of envious of that rape victim"

Fuzzbutt
@Background Pony #7B34
 
oversaturated colors, mostly. expressions copied, without understanding why they look that way. random rehashed plots, very crude understanding of conflict. but it’s still quite a good pony comic, and I really like how much care and love mellowbomb has put into it. the characters could be kind of interesting, if they had a little more practice with characterizing them. I think the artist just has a lot of ways they can improve.