@Light E7FE  
I love it. Will you upload that one

My correction  
https://orig00.deviantart.net/2080/f/2018/249/9/e/twilight_sparkle_tenderness_by_light_by_light262-dckljh2.png

@Durabiznik
 
@Light E7FE  
If you’re opposed to this edit specifically, it might be worth it to try improving on the original on your own (people do it all the time.)
 

 
It is for this reason that I would have preferred to be informed before, by MP, where I am asked to make an edit by my self, (that I am willing to do by the force of things). That I can do the correction myself with your criticism/advices ! That’s all! ^^
 
Sorry for spam, I was logout.

@Durabiznik  

 
It is for this reason that I would have preferred to be informed before, by MP, where I am asked to make an edit by my self, (that I am willing to do by the force of things). That I can do the correction myself with your criticism/advices ! That’s all! ^^

@Light E7FE  

 
The original version is gorgeous. People love it. Tons of work obviously went into it. But it has a flaw that sticks out at a first glance (the face is the first thing you look at), so eventually there was bound to be someone who would attempt to fix it. If you’re opposed to edits, you need to say so, otherwise editing art while crediting the original artist is viewed as fair game. If you’re opposed to this edit specifically, it might be worth it to try improving on the original on your own (people do it all the time.)

@Light E7FE
 
Then add a “Don’t use without permission” to your work. Seriously, this is the INTERNET. People will always use what is there, if not told otherwise. This is the idea, to share information, vision, art, etc…
 
As of now, this is a non profit edit with all the credits given to the original artist: Creative Commons.  
So step down a notch and just take it as feedback.

Okay, okay, I understand, the old version is not good, I know it and admit it, but I would like for the next time to be warned for this kind of “correction” (which is still anatomical errors) that I can give my approval or not. Because there, it was posted without my being informed.

@Light E7FE
 
@Durabiznik
 
nothing more to say about it. intention is one thing. but the result was very different.

@Light E7FE  

 
The problem with the original is that regardless of the intended depiction, every part of her face looks directed almost directly towards the viewer except the nose, which is disproportionately left-oriented to the point where the right nostril isn’t even visible. The edit might have its own issues, but it fixed the most glaring perspective discrepancy, so people like it.

Now, she is supposed to look at what she touches with her wing, with her head slightly slanting downwards and a little below. The principle was to play with the proximity of the gaze that was not quite in the direction of the reader, but almost, to encourage him to also look for Twilight’s gaze.  
And with a subtle smile.  
More like this https://derpibooru.org/1807745?q=artist%3Alight262.
 
In this version that I don’t approve, she just stares at you (and somebody or somepony who stares you like this Its is disturbing), with a smile a little disturbing.  
No tenderness in this edit, just tendentious look and smile.
 
Hello Monika! XD

@Light E7FE  
she has a muzzle, just a bit more pointy one. creepy? not to me or the majority here XD  
but at least, its more anatomical correct and believable. i am not trying to questioning your skills.  
since you can deliver really impressive works. but the snout of twi was really bad and just ruined it.  
for me at least.

@Light E7FE  
And pointy one at that.

Ahhh,I know my version (the old version) it was not perfect, I know it, and I not searching perfection, but it’s not my edit and this smile is just… creepy. And It have a big mistake here, Here, there is no muzzle. or it is very flat muzzle.

Now the smile looks like Doomguy.

Beautiful…

You know, I was feeling a bit bad about my art not nearly as many getting likes and faves as some low effort cheap porn… and then I saw this. Numbers-wise not getting as much attention as cheap porn, but also fucking beautiful. This and things like it deserve all of the attention and praise. There Ain’t No Justice (tm) so it won’t rate as highly as things with more boobs, but this is good art, and you should feel good.
 
Do things like this, and if you get three hundred “likes”, it is still BETTER than many things that get three thousand.
 
And those people can keep making their stuff too. It’s fine. As long as people like you keep doing art like you do also. There’s room for all of the artists and approaches to art.
 
Sorry… it’s been one of those days, and maybe I’m reminding myself of this more than anything, but there you go.

@SnoopyStallion  

 
I second that

Twilight is such a beautiful horse. ;-; I could stare at her bangs all day. <3

Beautiful

awww

Looks better, personally, this is what Edits should be about, improving even further a good piece.

That… does look better. Maybe a smoother gradient to make the muzzle look a bit less pointy would be even better, but it’s a really good edit nevertheless.

That’s top high quality edit. Well done.

looks much better

Maybe the snout is now a bit pointy. but at least its facing the correct direction and makes finally sense. Great edit.