This is also my very first comic featuring giant ponies! What’s next, animated giant ponies?
Starlight Glimmer likes kites, so she decides to show it off with the tinies below her hooves. However, Twilight Sparkle is concerned about this and tries to convince Starlight about the dangers for some tinies in the sky… until it was too late.
And yes, both ponies were tied in the poll’s result.
Twilight Sparkle vectors by: , , and
Starlight Glimmer vectors by: , , , and
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I own nothing. Used Clip Studio Paint PRO.
Thank you for the compliment. I do try to make my criticism useful. I’m glad you think so, even if you’re not the intended target.
Too bad for them if they don’t see it. Not an artist myself, but reading and/or listening to constructive criticism is always a way to improve oneself. Your comments are pretty accurate IMHO.
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I have uploaders hidden. I am speaking to the artist. If they don’t see it, oh well. Useless words into the void.
“My comic?” I only posted it XD I’ve found it on DA by chance… I wonder if the artist is a regular here, though…
The first panel in front of Starlight’s hooves, why is that section of buildings outlined in red?
Third panel and really the “plot” of the comic: you do realize pilots have windows to see out of, right? How did they fly into this giant kite? The blame gets put on Starlight in your comic, but the blame clearly belongs to them. It’s broad daylight, clear sky, and the kite is bigger than their aircraft.