Twilight shut down the orphanage my oc was at because of the abuse she found when making a surprise inspection.
He also met Scootaloo in the orphanage before her aunts gained custody of her.
I think you should add more details, such as how his parents died, where he used to live before the orphanage, or how he befriended the Cutie Mark Crusaders. Other than that, it’s good.
Great! His backstory feels more complete now.
@HenBasket
I added some stuff to the description
Thanks for the advice. I’ll try to add those later today.
Thanks for the support!
JK its nice, but needs fleshing out, its always nice to see people get into creating
Thanks!