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Yea I know, but thats mostly because the way I was editing it it was hard to change too much without ruining it, but I’ll definitely keep what you said in mind in my future drawings ^^
I definitely see an improvement, however subtle.
Like this ? http://prntscr.com/hawtwt Is that better?
@Background Pony #2092
and I’m sorry but that edit doesnt look good to me… also it seems like you thought I was using the “its just my style xdd” defense which I was not. The only thing i said that was even close to that is the “to me it doesnt look like that to me” part which was more talking about my general idea of masculine/feminine looks rather than if my style looks ok or not. But thanks anyway for trying to help ^^
Here are some quick fixes I made:
https://i.imgur.com/NjY8b44.jpg
What ‘looks good’ is subjective, so the changes might not sit well with you. It’s fine having your own style, but you shouldn’t start with one, rather learn proper anatomy then create your own style once you’ve mastered it (if that makes sense).
I think the main points are Rarity’s upper body appears too broad for a female, and her face is too masculine, with too much jaw and the appearance of too thick a neck. Better artists than I can be more specific.
Well, I guess you can look at it that way? Seems like a reoccurring thing in my human art and idk how to pinpoint it, the again, to me they dont look that way so i dunno. Do you have any tips on how to make it better?