the coloring is gorgeous and the texturing is spectacular. it could use some more perspective work at the early stages, drawing boxes to decide where the hooves go and such. I don’t think she’s too long though, because it’s an action pose, which can stretch a little bit more than it should, since our eyes would normally be mixing together the images of the mare as she moves. it’s like telegraphing.
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The wonky perspective makes the one with the sword look extremely long.
What does this have to do with anything?