New to ponyville

Hey I’m just trying to get an rp going so idk how to start one idk if I should post my oc’s info first or just jump in so I’m gonna take a shot hear so if I’m fucking up sorry just tell me please
 
It’s early afternoon in ponyville as the train pulls into the station from canterlot as ponys can be seen departing the train one pony is a steel gray unicorns with a very long mane and tail they are longer then most ponys mane and tails and this unicorn can be seen carrying a guitar case with his magic as he is looking for a new start in ponyville
 
(Btw he’s living with vinyl and Octavia so if anyone wants to rp hear should I be vinyl tavi or both or dose anyone els?)

(Well, for starters, you can begin by punctuating.)

(Dude I’m on an iPod these things can be a bitch at times to type on)

(it’s a dark and rainy night, and princehapp3 flies to the ponyville train station, exhausted and slightly emaciated… he lands on the ground, tired, and fading out of consciousness…The main six rush to his aid, but it’s too late, he’s passed out… When he comes to, he’s in twilight’s house, resting on her bed, the main six staring at him with concern.)  
applejack: you alright sugarcube?  
me: Yeah, I’m fine.  
twilight: that was quite a fall you had there. Who are you, and what brings you here?  
me: I am princehapp3. I’ve traveled miles to find a place to take refuge in, because my country is in danger…

(Dude this is badass)
 
Trent*he walks from the train station to the center of town as he looks around in awe at his new sourndings(sp)
 
 
(Remember I’m on SN iPod so typing is kinda of a bitch)