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Note I tried my best here everypony, but I still made some pretty glaring errors, and did some things I’m not happy with. So, I’d greatly appreciate it if y’all would let me know of anything that looks weird or off, so I don’t repeat the same mistakes again.
No problem, just keep up the good work.
Finally some constructive criticism:3 Wow, I can’t believe I didn’t notice that:p Thanks Napsack.
Aside from that, looking good. I eagerly await more.