They should have not gone to Canterlot. It is a silly place
Tried a few things here, including opaque speech bubbles (forcing myself to trying to really plan ahead regarding panel layout) and applying the rule of thirds and some Fibonacci spirals to the composition.
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Now it makes sense. Well, more sense…
The rest of the town is bonkers just like Ponyville. They could just walk up to her, I saw no reason to portray those parts.
Yes. It’s mostly the center panel, I guess. And the giant door. And them just suddenly being in the throne room like it’s no big deal…
Have you read the previous pages?
Is this a dream sequence? Everything is so… .weird