It’s  
not  
Time Turner

@Kanrabat  
Yes, i have one, and i am not the other.  
Seriously. this isn’t even an important issue. and this argument is generally pointless. Besides, there is also a difference between being a respectable person and just being a complete ass for no reason.

@Prince_Molerice
 
There’s a difference between having an “unpopular opinion” and being a total idiot.

@Kanrabat  
Oh someone has a unpopular opinion? must be a high school drop out. people today.

@Prince_Molerice
 
JFC, you should be ashamed that you are a high-school drop-out instead of glorifying it. :/

@Prince_Molerice
 
Language by its very nature has rules. Fail to follow said rules and you’re not speaking the language anymore, you’re just making random sounds.
 
You can’t call it English if you can’t be arsed to follow the rules of the language.

@Kanrabat  
Really thats just how they would prefer you to write. the letter i doesn’t HAVE to be capitalized. in fact in the english language you dont technically HAVE to do anything in any certain way. let people write (or in this case) type the way that fells natural to them. Who cares as long as you can tell (and here you can) what its saying. “ proper grammar “ if you ask me doesnt exists. Its just more stupid expectations set up my society. as for the ( to many “wells” ) when its narrative by a person, you dont do it how someone “should” write. you do it the way that person talks. maybe she says well alot. i know i do.

The critique: The art is very good for a first comic page. There’s still room for improvement as always. I’m curious how it will look 20 pages in.
 
I suspect English is not your primary language (mine is Frensh BTW). Even I see some cringe worthy gramatical mistakes. First of all, the word “I” MUST always be CAPITALISED. Never write “i”. “yourself” is just way too important so it must be represented by a BIG I.
 
Some other random spelling and grammatical checking:  
-“Well i beleive it’s time to introduce myself, where to begin..hmmm..”  
This need proper punctuation to work. It should be: “Well, I beleive it’s time to introduce myself. Where to begin? Hmmm…”
 
There’s other mistakes, but i’ll just point out another one for now. A few other phrase later, you should cut off a few “well”. Too many “well” at the start of too many phrases and we will drown in all that drawn water. Appart that, I dunno if you try to give an accent to Doc Hooves, but the second thing he say should be “Oh, let me guess! You smashed your clock in again, haven’t you?”. Clean out the typos. Also, once again, work on making the first letter in a phrase BIG and work on your punctuation.
 
For now, your main weakness is HOW you write. However, the story is still well written and the art is good enought to make me want more. I’d like to see where your story is going. I’ll be waiting for more and I’m looking forward to see how much more you can improve.