@EagleEye2
I’m rewriting it because I lost the first writing I did with it.

So, is it safe to say this isn’t coming back?

Does this mean the plan is for the slime ponies to turn some of the ponies in this world into slime ponies to assist them in eating the survivors? Or have I not read To Serve Pony enough?

@Josedx9
Thanks for the advice. I’ll be sure to make good use of it. And as for the questions. Hmm.. Yes, it is canon. This is a common problem with healers, and there is only one way to fix it. Gum Heart would go to the slime village to reform those ponies. Once they are reformed, a goo mare by the name “…” would have the prey sit in one spot next to each other to perform a spell that will “partly” erase their memories of them being eating and digested. Once that is done, the goo mare “…” will have slime guards escort them out of the village and back into Ponyville. Thus those ponies won’t say anything about the situation if they don’t remember.~ Gum Heart dose feel a little bad about digesting prey that wanted to be heal, so she needs to find other ways to keep her greedy stomach from digesting the prey inside. There are a few ways, but this one is mostly common~ >>3374228 I do have a lot of plans to do after NTO, so hopefully I can get these pages out soon. ♡

@Best Ponies
What I can recommend is that when writing a comic story, it’s good keep things simple and easy to follow.
If what you want is to create a world around this story, then develop it little by little and create expectations for the next project you have in mind about this story, so that you can give it continuity and create interest in what could happen next.

Honestly, it surprises me that today there seems to be no vore artist who creates a story with real continuity that shows the consequences of making prey disappear and dealing with it.

For example, I love the context that Gum Heart has unintentionally digested somepony in the past revealed in >>3365819 (if this is canon within this comic) but I want to know more about what she did next.
Didn’t anyone ask him about her patients?
How she hide his prey’s cutie marks?
prey’s cutie mark fade over time once their magic has been completely assimilated?
Does she feel bad about what she did or does she just feel disappointed in herself for falling into temptation again?

anyway…

@Josedx9
All I can say is that this comic was supposed to be really short, which is why I didn’t write anything down… Yes, I know that is silly, but for some reason, I kept going, and now we’re here. The next pages should be better now that I wrote some stuff down for them. My apologies for this sloppy mess, I promise you, this would have been a whole lot better and shorter if I wrote stuff down. Either way, thanks for commenting.

Uhh, so why is she unconscious? The last time we saw her in this comic, she was in a “private session” with the doctor.

I’ll be honest here, I really love the comic, but the way the story is being carried out makes lose interest little by little, especially because of the gigantic update deadlines.

I mean, I’ve been following the comic since the page Twilight was eaten and so far that arc hasn’t been picked up while you’re trying to count like six other arcs happening in the background.
I mean, at this rate I’m going to assume that you will create another arc before continuing with the one on this page or you will continue with something else like Sour Drop on her date with the one who was going to be her prey.

I would have preferred that the story lean towards something more direct and simple, like how some nurse slimes devour ponies quietly while they erase their tracks so that no one notices that there are missing ponies and that among the prey that were going to disappear that day is one of the mane6 instead of this medley of stories that don’t seem to go anywhere

PS: I don’t want to sound offensive, I just want to express an opinion and of course I’m not demanding anything

You mean ASS-ets

She ate bonbon (aka sweetie drops) by shrinking her to size as a mint and ate her whole

I bet Mrs. Red Herring has huge mare assets to get some stallions?

Cool