That was very exciting good job :)

I love how they move. Great animation, hope to see more!

Лол! Давно я не видела такой хорошей фанатской анимации по ФоЕ! Вы молодец)
Спасибо большое за эту работу!

3:04: Morning Glory finally knows how Blackjack feels whenever she needs to open a lock but there’s no P-21 around.

Given the first second of the animation I knew it was going to be good. It’s all about that goofy movement, something very unique for an animation of this style. You take what works with your human animations on YT and take it here. IMO it makes it much more entertaining. It also helps that you are using a 30fps (?), which is also rare, but synergizes well with those movements. Over the top movement is a feature on 2D animations you take full advantage off.

SFX and BG music are all well done. It is such an improvement over part 1, where it’s mostly a white noise. Some voice lines, though, are hard to understand. Did you get sent multiple voice lines from each actor?

The pacing was good too. I’d make a little adjustments in some places, but nothing more than a few frames.

One detail you could fix is cutie marks on the inner thigh.

The walking animation, it’s just so funny. It adds tremendously to the goofiness and entertainment. You better not change anything about it, it’s perfect.

3:17 in this scene MG needs to blink. She stares at BJs ass for half a minute, probably not even listening to her. When I first watched this scene, I thought MG was just frozen. Only on rewatch did I notice the little movements she does. So I think that some major movements would be better for a BG character: blink one or twice, lift a forehoof, turn their head. It’s work, but compared to how the rest of the animation is so full of life, here she is… not.

Overall great animation, love your style. Keep improving and don’t lose your passion.

@Delly
Imma be honest,the main reason why I even added that scene,was because I just wanted to add the bonk head somewhere in the video X3

Damn, that came out of nowhere. Very nice. Only thing I could pick out as being out of character was BJ being so hard on Glory in the beginning, in PH, she would have never hit her like that, Glory was… Very special to her, even when BJ was all drunk.

9/10, would love to see more <3