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Sorry, I'm also trying to be a writer, and I'm brutally honest when it comes to problems that I can see. Honestly, it would be better to start smaller and work your way up to stuff like this after you learn how to avoid clichés, choose/create characters that fit the requirements better, and develop an art-style the complements your ideas/themes instead of go against them.
Time to get spooky
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[@BigBadSeed
Sorry, I'm also trying to be a writer, and I'm brutally honest when it comes to problems that I can see. Honestly, it would be better to start smaller and work your way up to stuff like this after you learn how to avoid clichés, choose/create characters that fit the requirements better, and develop an art-style the complements your ideas/themes instead of go against them.