Mr100dragon100 
reformation is the best
here is the rest, how is it?
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*Everypony gasped in shock, Even the king and queen!
How could you do this? said Alistair knight.
They might be regular ponies, but they are not like the ones who raided us! said Fern breeze.
The four ponies yelled, whine (almost crying) and tried to make them see their way.
The two rulers roared in anger and turned into their wolf forms to look threatening.
The crowd was in an uproar.
Both Alistair knight and Aaron moonstone tried to one-up each other eventually; Aaron gave in and went to a submissive pose in fear and defeat and backed away.
Then the four ponies heard the king's voice again.
Leave... and never come back! Said Alistair knight in a harsh, angry, low voice.
Three of the four ponies responded to this being unfair. Furthermore, stating that the king is corrupt. Aaron remained silent.
Silence! Yelled Alistair knight.
Aaron, what is your choice? said Alistair knight.
Aaron was silent; finally, he spoke.
We'll leave. Aaron reluctantly said.
Later on, all of the ponies in the town attended the departure of the rouge ponies. All four ponies had tearful goodbyes to their families.
We see why you have to do this, though we won't allow it; it's cruel and will continue to make ponies see us as monsters, now go. said Alistair knight.
After this, The four ponies leave their home forever.
Later in the forest, the four ponies fight; blamed each other for this, but Aaron stopped them.
I know we have failed, it's my fault, yet this is not the end. Said Aaron.
What do you mean? said Hazelblossom
I mean, we have a chance to make a new pack; we just need to find the ponies who turned into wolves, and then we will show what a strong wolf pony pack should be, and we will be the perfect example, come we have work to do. Explained Aaron.
They all followed Aaron; their story ends here, but we will see them again one day, but we'll see if Aaron will succeed in his quest._]
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this is the end of the story
, I feel the ending narration needs to be better but know how it's like a cliff hanger but I want it to sound more epic or natural for a book and not for a DBZ like narration ending, what should I do?
[_
*Everypony gasped in shock, Even the king and queen!
How could you do this? said Alistair knight.
They might be regular ponies, but they are not like the ones who raided us! said Fern breeze.
The four ponies yelled, whine (almost crying) and tried to make them see their way.
The two rulers roared in anger and turned into their wolf forms to look threatening.
The crowd was in an uproar.
Both Alistair knight and Aaron moonstone tried to one-up each other eventually; Aaron gave in and went to a submissive pose in fear and defeat and backed away.
Then the four ponies heard the king's voice again.
Leave... and never come back! Said Alistair knight in a harsh, angry, low voice.
Three of the four ponies responded to this being unfair. Furthermore, stating that the king is corrupt. Aaron remained silent.
Silence! Yelled Alistair knight.
Aaron, what is your choice? said Alistair knight.
Aaron was silent; finally, he spoke.
We'll leave. Aaron reluctantly said.
Later on, all of the ponies in the town attended the departure of the rouge ponies. All four ponies had tearful goodbyes to their families.
We see why you have to do this, though we won't allow it; it's cruel and will continue to make ponies see us as monsters, now go. said Alistair knight.
After this, The four ponies leave their home forever.
Later in the forest, the four ponies fight; blamed each other for this, but Aaron stopped them.
I know we have failed, it's my fault, yet this is not the end. Said Aaron.
What do you mean? said Hazelblossom
I mean, we have a chance to make a new pack; we just need to find the ponies who turned into wolves, and then we will show what a strong wolf pony pack should be, and we will be the perfect example, come we have work to do. Explained Aaron.
They all followed Aaron; their story ends here, but we will see them again one day, but we'll see if Aaron will succeed in his quest.
this is the end of the story