Darkest Lunar Flower 
Depart peasants
Oooh very important their is little eye-whites (sclera) visable, this gives the illusion that they are of lower intelligence and more animalistic, the eyes are the window of the soul take a look these.
In this it makes use of eyes brows and more human like eyes, allowing for a variety of facial expressions without falling into uncanny valley.
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This is a great example of eye whites indicating human sentience. The audience knows that when the moms eyes (the bear) go all black that she has become all bear, that she has changed and is no longer able to function like a human.
A larger head to body ratio that allows for more brain space also gives a creature seemingly more intelligence and feeling and ultimately makes them more relatable to the audience.
In your drawing rarity seems to lack brain space, and many others in your characters. It makes her look dull and slow witted, like she’s about to take a dump and eat some hay or something and leave what makes her human like behind.
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This is a great example of eye whites indicating human sentience. The audience knows that when the moms eyes (the bear) go all black that she has become all bear, that she has changed and is no longer able to function like a human.
A larger head to body ratio that allows for more brain space also gives a creature seemingly more intelligence and feeling and ultimately makes them more relatable to the audience.
In your drawing rarity seems to lack brain space, and many others in your characters. It makes her look dull and slow witted, like she’s about to take a dump and eat some hay or something and leave what makes her human like behind.