@Background Pony #35C6  
Could you send me some?

Part 2 in progress… http://boards.4chan.org/mlp/res/16710381#p16711843

Restricted changes is a common theme in ABDL punishment pr0n. Spanking is also commonly associated with diaper punishment. I don’t really get people who want to get a diaper rash, but it is something I can ignore in a story. If I have a problem with the diaper rash it is that it is unrealistic to get a rash in only a couple hours if you haven’t been wearing regularly. It might be interesting if there was a magical diaper rash creme that cured all skin problems, but is painful for 5 minutes or something while it does it’s work. There was something like that in the Rejuve Universe.

the cool thing is that I started that thread. the world is a small place.

@Background Pony
 
I’ve written quite a bit of scat/piss already, if you want, I’ll send you a link to some of my best stories.  
If you like diapers, they you’ll have to wait until I write it.

@Background Pony  
Ah, I never saw that post, thanks. Also, if you continued this then I would love you forever.

Anyone else wondering, the writer left this in the thread:
 
Haven’t got any more written right now.
 
*Maybe tomorrow I’ll work on a chapter wherin Twilight gets her bed-time diaper change (last of the night) then feels a shit coming on?  
Can she hold it all night?  
No_
 
Alternately, others could just continue the story. Too late for me…gotta get up in the morning.
 

 
 
Now, I write watersports/scat myself, maybe I should take up the task of this?

@Background Pony  
Are you logged in? If not then you need to click the filters link at the top of the site and select the “all images” filter.

Why can’t I view the questionable photos on my IPad?!?

@Frostbite  
I’m sorry. Maybe some day, someone will translate it into a board book with only pictures so you can understand it.

@Ferrotter
 
Tl;dr Your opinion

@Ferrotter  
And hopefully the author reads your comment and might take it as advice?

@Ferrotter  
To each their own, yeah. I still kinda look forward if there’s gonna be a sequel :)

@stargrazer  
To each their own. I found every time there was something likeable in it, the author ruined it for me again. But yes, the moment when she actually wet herself was indeed wonderful.

@Ferrotter  
Eh, 3changes a day is not necessarily rash-causing, if there’s enough protection, no matter how much the story tried to emphasize on it. And the 30 paddling before the first diaper would actually make Twilight welcome the warm wetness that’d calm the ache on her butt… also, about them being ooc… Twi really didn’t read the assigned 12 books in SAYS. I can’t say anything for Celestia’s behavior though… maybe she’s molestia or trollestia in disguise. To me, this story had more good elements than bad, therefore I like it. And the wetting scene was wonderful xD

@stargrazer  
“What wasn’t good here?”
 
Twilight being out of character. (Not reading 12 books in a weekend? Twilight? Seriously? In fairness, the author does deserve some praise for tying it to “Spike At Your Service.”) Celestia being so out of character vindictive she’d fit into King Sombra’s hallucination doorway, not a pornographic clopfic where she’s supposed to actually be herself. Gratutitously paddling Twilight 30 times before putting her first diaper on. (Some people may like both paddling and watersports; here it only adds a “that’s also my fetish” vibe that detracts from the watersports story. Mixed fetishes usually doesn’t work unless the writing is exceptionally good.) Punishing Twilight with diaper rash. ([sarcasm]Because, you know, nothing says “sexy” like tissue breakdown and inflammation.[/sarcasm]) And the ridiculously rigid scene scripting of three timed diaper changes per day, which seems to be calculated specifically to produce that “sexy” rash. Even if it wasn’t strictly about some sort of rash fetish, that sort of pre-determined rigidity to the scene is a huge wingbonerkill. There are many potential in-story scenarios that could force Twilight to sit in her mess for a while (nonstop flow of library customers; Spike accidentally burned the diapers and she had to stay in the one she had until her tormentor got back from Filthy Rich’s store with more of them; an emergency in Ponyville she had to attend to rather than getting changed; etc.) Instead we’re handed the deus ex machina of “precisely three changes per day, no more, no less.” It’s not only lazy writing, it telegraphs the author clopping to his own cleverness at coming up with this shit.
 
It wasn’t all bad. The description of Twilight wetting herself was good. The “Spike At Your Service” in-joke was excellent. And the reactions of her customers were written quite well. I think it mostly tried to do too much in one short story, and failed because of it.

This ain’t bad.

This is it. This is my exact fetish. Down to the letter. Perfect.

@Background Pony  
One story was half a day, she still has 2.5 days which means 5 more stories!
 
Right?
 
@Ferrotter  
What wasn’t good here?

@Background Pony
 
 
Still.
 
PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2  
PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2

@Chaoslux  
@zzz100ificati  
@stargrazer  
@Chaoslux
 
This thing is months old. Look at the date, it was written in march.

Normally I like watersports, but in this case I’ll have to make an exception.

That was great, Part 2 plox. Or have it in actual fic format.

@zzz100ificati  
I AGREE PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2!!!