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Ministry of Image - Fanfiction Printing

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I decided to redo the cover.

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Resu
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
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@SourCherry  
Sorry dude, I don’t know nothing about art so I have no idea what to comment on.
 
If you saw how cracked my phone screeb was you might understand why it was the main thing I noticed.
SourCherry
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@Background Pony #79D1  
Normally, I do. But after a week of bad sleep from an ear infection, my patience is thin. I am fine with criticism, when it is actually constructive. That, however, was not. It was unnecessarily blunt, nor did they offer a solution.
 
Would you not be frustrated at that point, after you’ve slaved away for hours, to get that as the first response, especially while ill? Now, had it been something like 1:1 on good and bad, it would be much easier to swallow as a more complete criticism, that takes both positive and negative into consideration.
 
Now granted, I usually shy away from commenting because I do not much care to argue, but this one just was the one too much in an already shitty week.
Background Pony #79D1
@SourCherry  
If that’s how you’re going to respond to people pointing out errors that you can use to improve your art, then maybe it would be better if you stopped now, because it seems like you don’t have a thick enough skin for it.
 
A shame, though the art is nice.
SourCherry
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
The Power of Love - Given to a publicly verified artist with an image under their artist’s tag that has reached 1000 upvotes
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@Background Pony #2AA2  
I don’t know, this lineart alone was 2 days of hard work, to get “insignificant detail is wrong” as the first comment? Feels like I’ve wasted my efforts and my talent, if that is the only thing in this that catches the eye.
SourCherry
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
The Power of Love - Given to a publicly verified artist with an image under their artist’s tag that has reached 1000 upvotes
Best Artist - Providing quality, Derpibooru-exclusive artwork
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@Resu  
Ah. So it seems. It clearly cannot be because Stable-Tec was prone to errors in their Stable builds, or that the cog is further away from the frame than a centimetre.
 
Thank you for bringing this to my attention, I love how that is apparently the only thing worth noticing in this piece. Thank you, for pointing that out for me so I can delete this piece and stop drawing.