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Description
An attempt to improve an admittedly awful one from earlier.
I moved her elbow up and out so her left arm isn’t so short and misshapen. I narrowed her waist and left shoulder, and put more emphasis on her breasts, to try to give her a more feminine form. And I made her face longer, rounder, and narrower.
Thanks to Cosmas-the-Explorer for the helpful feedback. Hopefully I’ve faithfully captured your suggestions.
Constructive feedback welcome and appreciated.
Edit: Someone apparently marked my old one as a duplicate, so here’s the link back to the model photo.
I moved her elbow up and out so her left arm isn’t so short and misshapen. I narrowed her waist and left shoulder, and put more emphasis on her breasts, to try to give her a more feminine form. And I made her face longer, rounder, and narrower.
Thanks to Cosmas-the-Explorer for the helpful feedback. Hopefully I’ve faithfully captured your suggestions.
Constructive feedback welcome and appreciated.
Edit: Someone apparently marked my old one as a duplicate, so here’s the link back to the model photo.
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Her chin needs to be longer since you stopped too short and it needs to look more like an oval.
Dash’s breasts need to be more pronounced in contrast to her torso. Or Dash’s torso needs to be less broad and look skinnier to make her have a more female physique.
Dash’s right arm needs work. It needs to look like it’s going behind Rainbow’s torso because right now it makes her right arm look too small.
The most important thing to ask is, how can I make Rainbow look more like that soccer player in that picture. I can see that this Rainbow has potential but you need to improve the proportions to bring out her more feminine figure even if your Rainbow Dash does have breasts and some curves already.
I hope this helps.