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Commission from Sir–Raptor

“Adagio sitting at a desk and wondering how to get revenge on the Rainbooms. Adagio remarking if only they were as easy to deal with as mistakes while writing with a pencil. Unbeknownst to Adagio however the Humane 7 have been mysterious shrunken to a super smol size and are on her desk… and in the impact zone of the incoming pencil eraser wielded by Adagio. Said pencil eraser dwarfs them utterly and engulfs their field of view. They naturally panic at their incoming doom. Said doom takes a few flavors (alternate endings.) […]

Ending 3:[…] Instead of erasing their clothes or crushing them outright it erases their remaining size and the Humane 7 shrink even further! They soon enter the microbial realm where upon Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer are preyed upon and eaten by microbes leaving only Rarity and Twilight Sparkle left. As the last 2 shrink further then enter the atomic realm and are in short order smaller than a atom. Still shrinking they embrace each other in love and passion. Then Rarity and Twilight shrink right out of sight never to be seen again. […]”

Other endings:
>>2267582 Adagio’s unperceived revenge Alt 1 by mythkaz

>>2267583 Adagio’s unperceived revenge Alt 2 by mythkaz

The reason why I did 3 variants instead of complementing the ending was mostly for fitting options, the original idea involved having Adagio in last panel unaware of what she did, but I felt the plot could be rearranged to mention her intentions somewhere in between (doll panel) and just focus on the result to end the comic.

I really don’t have comments for this ending.

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Commission from Sir--Raptor  
 
"Adagio sitting at a desk and wondering how to get revenge on the Rainbooms. Adagio remarking if only they were as easy to deal with as mistakes while writing with a pencil. Unbeknownst to Adagio however the Humane 7 have been mysterious shrunken to a super smol size and are on her desk... and in the impact zone of the incoming pencil eraser wielded by Adagio. Said pencil eraser dwarfs them utterly and engulfs their field of view. They naturally panic at their incoming doom. Said doom takes a few flavors (alternate endings.) [...] 
 
Ending 3:[...] Instead of erasing their clothes or crushing them outright it erases their remaining size and the Humane 7 shrink even further! They soon enter the microbial realm where upon Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer are preyed upon and eaten by microbes leaving only Rarity and Twilight Sparkle left. As the last 2 shrink further then enter the atomic realm and are in short order smaller than a atom. Still shrinking they embrace each other in love and passion. Then Rarity and Twilight shrink right out of sight never to be seen again. [...]" 
 
Other endings:   
 >>2267582 Adagio's unperceived revenge Alt 1 by mythkaz 
 
 >>2267583 Adagio's unperceived revenge Alt 2 by mythkaz 
 
The reason why I did 3 variants instead of complementing the ending was mostly for fitting options, the original idea involved having Adagio in  last panel unaware of what she did, but I felt the plot could be rearranged to mention her intentions somewhere in between (doll panel) and just focus on the result to end the comic. 
 
I really don't have comments for this ending.

https://www.deviantart.com/mythkaz/art/2020FEB06A-MLP-Adagio-s-unperceived-revenge-Alt-3-829500436

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Clever Clovers

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This kinda reminds me of that scene from Fairly Odd Parents’ “Abracatastrophe” special where Timmy and Mr. Crocker have a big fight in the atoms of a pencil eraser.

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Background Pony #7B15

They did not get eaten or disappeared. In reality, the mane 6 (including Sunset Shimmer) will enter a place called Quantum Realm(a dimension in the Multiverse only accessible through magical energy. It means that they would enter a reality where all concepts of time and space become irrelevant as they shrink for all eternity. Everything that they know, and love, gone forever).If one of mane 6 (including Sunset Shimmer) lucky enough to get sucked in time vortex(they travel through time and get out the Quantum Realm and into their normal world as normal size(but at different time, time travel is possible if the went subatomic and enter Quantum Realm, and also a change to escape when they shrinking forever). It is even possible to travel through time without altering the future in Quantum Realm (as they go to the past, then the present becomes their past and the past becomes their future. So they cannot change the past).
So yeah, they didn’t die, they just get stuck in Quantum Realm

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Background Pony #700F

If you could take the outcome of V1 and combine it with Adagio’s suggestion in V3 we could see some very risqué results.

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