@Zharkaer  
Thanks for telling me. I can draw even more better and fix them it in the next future. I guess i will make more feminist next time… :)
 
But honestly, i draw some humans via screenshots and vectors to look like Trinityinyang did. So yeah.

@Michaelsety  
The pony manestyle doesn’t quite fit on a human; it makes her look like she’s balding. She looks almost like she has Popeye arms, and she doesn’t appear to have any wrists. Same applies to her legs, they’re just one big cylinder. The nose looks a bit off, but I’m not sure how you’d fix it. It sort of makes her look like a monkey. The shape of her head looks too similar to the pony head, and doesn’t fit the human facial structure that well, though this might just be my own preference. Female bodies generally have their hips at an equal length to where their shoulders are. As it is right now, she looks kind of mannish. Try to use references for hands. I know how tough they are, and I’m not too good at them either. Another thing: I would suggest at least giving Starlight a shadow, so it gives it a bit more depth and clarifies exactly where she’s supposed to be. Also, minor nitpick, but the text on the book doesn’t follow the perspective at all.  
Hope this helps.

If there are any mistakes, please let me know about it.

aww so cute