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Phew! Finally done! And it’s more pony! Yay! Even better, it’s pony shipping!  
Though it’s a ship with some pretty contentious characters, I’m afraid…  
No drama or shitposting in the comments, please.
 
This thing kicked my ass. Still not 100% happy with how it turned out - it’s too long, too talk-y, the ending is weak, everybody doesn’t feel entirely in character, and I have no good title - but it’s much better than scrapping the whole thing which I was close to doing some time ago, as I had serious trouble making it work at all…  
I hope some of you will like it anyway.
 
It’s full of cheesy fluff. Or fluffy cheese? Sickeningly sweet, anyway.
 
And there’s a little something extra, shipping wise, in the background of one of the frames, if you can spot it…  
Though it’s very tiny…

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Some Jerk
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@Neko Majin C
You’re not the first one to say that about the cuts. I could hide or edit out the “slashes”, but for
me they instead always look like a stray thread still holding together. Plus, without it, they’d seem
too wide and empty, I think…
@Populuxe Cowboy
Thanks! Glad I do have a realistic view of it’s flaws, and glad you like it anyway! ;)
I can’t take credit for Trixie’s person switch, sadly. It’s something I’ve seen done in fanfic and
thought was a very nice emotional touch.
@Some Jerk
What is a “fuckboy” in this context? ‘Cause the only meanings I’m aware of are not positive at all…
 
Yeah its not. Just a total tool who just takes it like a champ from any and all comers.
Background Pony #BFAB
This is very silly and they are a bit too annoyingly teenage-valley-girly. A tad too much giggling too.  
But I still find this somehow pleasing and endearing to look at. Keep arting and not bad.
Kathara_Khan
Artist -

@Neko Majin C  
You’re not the first one to say that about the cuts. I could hide or edit out the “slashes”, but for  
me they instead always look like a stray thread still holding together. Plus, without it, they’d seem  
too wide and empty, I think…
 
 
@Populuxe Cowboy  
Thanks! Glad I do have a realistic view of it’s flaws, and glad you like it anyway! ;)  
I can’t take credit for Trixie’s person switch, sadly. It’s something I’ve seen done in fanfic and  
thought was a very nice emotional touch.
 
 
@Some Jerk  
What is a “fuckboy” in this context? ‘Cause the only meanings I’m aware of are not positive at all…
Populuxe

Enjoy me. Won’t you?
I liked it, even if I agree with you when you say it’s too long, too talky and the ending is a bit weak. Despite the problems, I’m still glad you made it. There is plenty plenty to like, too. I especially liked Trixie switching to first person when she asked Starlight out for real. This is a good ship and I like seeing someone having fun with it. Keep working on the story and I’m sure it’s going to tighten up and be even better.
Neko Majin C
Pixel Perfection - Hot Pockets Spotted
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Preenhub - We all know what you were up to this evening~
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!

Twilight's Westley
My only problem with this comic is that it looks like Starlight has been cutting herself. And ruining her pants while doing so.