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Champions of Equestria

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Decent skill got me this far? Woah. It’s my first art piece, so be gentle please >w< Also I forgot to make her a vampony… dumb me.
 
Story behind this is that my friend asked me to draw his character. I started this two weeks ago and just got done today. It’s kind of ridiculous, but better late than never!
 
EDIT: I know it’s not the best, but it’s okay if you don’t like it! Everyone has a right to their own opinion, and I respect that.

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Ciderkiller

Ohhhhhh well, thanks to all of you for constructive criticism instead of outrageous blabbering! I’ll keep in mind what you’ve said, and put it to use in my next piece
Goblinette
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@MSIfan666  
No, no ,no.  
Artist don’t listen to this fam
 
In your next piece, you should forget all about depth, realism, and complex shadows and lighting and all that.  
Try instead, multi-layered sketches, inked outlines, simple shadows, and maybe even tracing.
deactivatedb0b7f13ab9

welp, unlike the comments here, I’m gonna be honest with you. It doesn’t look awesome, but for first art piece, its decent. c: I would do certainly worse. Anyways, here is a few things you need to include/consider in your next drawings: Depth. A line for the head. Better anatomy. Smoother traces. c:  
Good luck.
Avaritia

professional yeeter
The head could use some work, looks like an upside down pear!  
Otherwise GREAT for your first piece of art! ^^