Part 2:
 
Me: lands at sweet apple acres wow! This land is so cool! Where do I even start?! I but I gotta stay foucoused on getting those apples to bake an apple pie for spiral swirl… sees and apple tree and flies over to it time to get these yummy apples! bucks 10 apples off of the tree
 
Applejack: hay! Why are you bucking those apples down from my tree?! They belong to me, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith, and apple Bloom…! If I can find her. a tear drops down from her eye I haven’t seen apple bloom ever since she got babysitted by spiral swirl.
 
Me: Applejack… stop crying and look deep into my eyes and listen to the sound of my voice.
 
Applejack: tries to cover eyes and block ears but somehow can’t and looks into my eyes and listens to the sound of my voice
 
Me: Applejack… you are spiral swirl’s slave…
 
Applejack: Cadey… I am spiral swirl’s slave…
 
Me: and when I clop my hoof, you will wake up, and obey only me and spiral swirl and other hypnotized ponies…
 
Applejack: And when you clop your hoof, I will wake up, and obey only you and spiral swirl and other hypnotized ponies…
 
Me: good pony, Applejack. clops hoof
 
Applejack: gets hypnotized never mind… you can have… the apples…
 
Me: perfect! picks up 10 apples now, let’s go to spiral swirl’s house!
 
Applejack: ok!
 
Me: uses magic to give Applejack wings
 
Me and Applejack: fly to spiral swirl’s house
 
Stay tuned for part 3!
 
Voice actor of me: me (duh!)
 
Voice actor of applejack: rayman

Me: ok. watches the watch swing back and forth huh… that’s actually a really cool watch…AHH!!! I can’t help it! I’m feeling so sleepy now! falls asleep
 
Spiral swirl: good girl. puts hoof on my forehead now, when I clop my hooves, you will wake up, hypnotized to believe that you are my slave. Understand?
 
Me: snores yes… snores I am your Slave… snores I am all yours… snores and no one else’s… snores you are my only friend… snores
 
Spiral swirl: good girl. Now, keep reapeating those words in your head. When I clop my hooves, you will wake up and do only these things unless asked to stop. Understand?
 
Me: snores yes… snores
 
Spiral swirl: good girl. takes hoof off my head now… WAKE UP!!! clops hooves
 
Me: wakes up hypnotized what can I do for you, my mistress?
 
Spiral swirl: thank you for asking, my good slave. I want you to bake me an apple pie. Go to sweet apple acres and pick some apples. If applejack, apple bloom, Big Macintosh, or Granny Smith every get angry, use your magic to hypnotize them into being my salves.
 
Me: yes mistress. flies to sweet apple acres
 
What do you think will happen next? No one knows! Stay tuned for part 2!
 
Voice actor of me: myself (duh!)
 
Voice actor of spiral swirl: bunkum the rabbid
 

 
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@MightyShockwave  
I’m fine with that type of hypnosis, i just don’t like Rathbanes stuff.

@ViperBits
 
@TheYoshiTerminator3.0
 
A lot of people, myself included, love hypnosis for its own sake. I like the idea of submission and obedience in general. In fact, using it for sex kinda takes me out of it. Sure, I like elements of the erotic, but outright smut seems kinda like a waste for it.

@ViperBits  
I agree. Its not a very good series.

zzzzzzzzzzz

@TheYoshiTerminator3.0  
Bah! So much potential and they haven’t even used the sex tag >_>  
What is the point of a hypnosis story if no kinky sexy stuff happens!? =\

@ViperBits  
Bad Therapy  
Its on both Deviantart & FIMfiction.

@Dulset  
Which fanfic?

Oh hey, I’ve been reading that fic.

sweet!

I thought it was a noose from the thumbnail.

@SP-220 HawkFire (SpartanPony; Halo based)  
Happens all the time :(

Tfw hypnotism doesn’t work on you