[NSFW] Monster Musume thread
Dono & M.Storm 
A purpose.
The Nuckelavee of Bloodborne
In a Victorian styled dream where only the sunset prevails and no alteration between day and night happens, a loner walks among the disorganized and filth of the streets where lamp posts flicker.
The loner wore a musketeer hat with a green feather on top, a grey trench coat and a bespoke striped yellow suit with a walnut-brown bartender vest. The pigment of their skin was between a light-brown color and the hair was black. To even add a bit more of character to them-self, they supported having a handlebar moustasche. What they carried with them were just a chainsaw (with a knife switch) and a blunderbuss. They walked cautiously, for they knew that these streets always had some creature lurking around in the darkness of the alleys.
To be even more careful, the loner looked around his surroundings, scanning and paying attention to what possibly could jump out at him. He sees a street sign, the name of the street was Grover Rd. The sign was hanging on its last thread, spinning slowly because of a small wind passing by. The loner had to find a way out of this dream, out of this mysterious realm that copied the one from his reality. It was then that he heard the accompanying sound of hooves walking along the brick road from nearby.
He recognized the sound belonging to a horse but it soon turned out to be more than just a horse… It looked like a person riding a horse but at a closer and more observant look, it looked like the rider and the horse had become one. Like the upper half of the rider was what stuck out of the horse’s back while it searched for something. The loner grew terrified actually from seeing this thing roam around, the question was… Should he respond to fight or flight?
He quickly thought up an answer and decided to fight this thing, it had to be done because he didn’t want to encounter it again. He slowly walked towards its direction, his heart trembling with beats of fear, spine tingling along with other senses, as if it was a bad idea to even try to confront this thing. This creature… Was completely something else entirely, something from a nightmare for sure. The creature spotted him, the horse neighed and rose up, moving its front two legs as the merged rider kept its eyes on him. This was a bad idea.
The horse part began to run full steam, the loner had the two options again: Fight or Flight? He kept towards fight but maybe he could also lead it somewhere to where he would have the advantage… It grew close rather quick and he decided to aim the blunderbuss at it before firing. The horse only flinched and if it were not for the loner acting on his instincts, he would’ve been trampled by the creature if he hadn’t rolled out of the way. The creature turned around as the horse snorts, both seeing him beginning to run away. The horse neighed and began to run after him.
{“Where do you think you’re going?”}
The creature thought as it chased after him, growing even more frustrated. The loner ran into an alley on the right, the horse creature skidding a bit to try and turn without falling over. The loner kept on running, following the paths of the alley, making many turns. This possibly could slow it down and eventually lose him and he’d be free but that was all theory, right now, this was about survival. He kept running but soon went around another corner and waited, hoping it’ll loose him. He listens attentively, listening for the clopping of hooves.
{“Oh where did he go? He hasn’t escaped yet, I know he’s around here, he has to be… Damn these alleyways, it’d do me better without them even being here.”}
The creature reached its long right arm around a corner, feeling for something but there was nothing there other than another wall.
{“All the men I’ve seen who came this way have escaped me before but this one will not be so lucky. Yes, he’ll be my… Stallion. I’ll force him to be mine if it has to be that way.”}
She kept moving along the alleyways, looking around for him. He on the other hand heard the creature coming and began to brace himself for what is to come. Reloading his blunderbuss, he decides to catch it by surprise but something from around the corner grabbed him by the face and quickly pulled him away from his spot. He then sees it was the creature but now to him it looked more feminine now. It certainly had some womanly parts but as both it and the horse looked at him.
{“I finally got hi~~”}
She suddenly was shot by him, letting him go as the horse neighed and rose up. He lands on his arse, quickly getting up and running away to escape. That shot… so close to its face and didn’t even kill. How strong was that thing? Over at the feminine creature, she rubbed her face with both of her hands, the horse stabilizing as she was now furious.
{“That stupid idiot! He wanted to kill me!”}
She thought for a moment before a sinister grin came to her face.
{“Good. I want my stallion to think that he has a winning chance before he realizes the cold truth. Come on.”}
She commanded the horse to pursue the loner, the horse trying its best to hurry and not fall.
Once out of the alleyways, the loner quickly looked around for a place to hide at, though he may be unfortunate.
He couldn’t go the opposite way so he only went forward but something rushed through one of the buildings. Bricks laid out, glass, a bit of infrastructure, and debris of smoke. He had an idea what it could be and took out the chainsaw hybrid, the smile clearing and showing it to be the creature. The horse stomped its right hoof.
“Fin-a~~…lly…”
It began to speak but had a time using verbal communication.
{“Why are you so nervous now? Oh no… He’s hotter than I thought! I-I must have him.”}
He braced himself, the creature getting ready to fight him.
My name is Gretchen, stallion. You will be mine!
Commentary on how she moves, attacks, and defends
Gretchen is not really a combative type. She can attack from a distance and up close but she does not block or parry. She can only move by the horse, other than that she can twist her whole body around to see where the loner has gone off too in order to keep up with him. Her horse can match the speed of the normal horse speed but if she really gets persistent, she can up the horsepower to however she sees is fit.
Excerpt of her battle quotes:
{“Those toys can’t hurt me that much. It’s futile.”}
{“Just be a good boy and let me take you as mine.”}
{“Come on! Just keep trying to get on my bad side!”}
Personality
She is a nightmare (type of enemy) and had ascended her consciousness to a higher plane. She is in her perfected state/form and is ever persistent on what she finds as tasks or goals. She may be mostly quiet but inside she has the heart and strength of a mare who follows her desires. She is more than what she appears to be.
Abilities
Other than being an ascended being who is gifted with an elevated consciousness, her abilities are rather simple. She can force her horse to become fast as she wants it, she is incredibly strong, and can extend her arms. Her upper half is unnaturally flexible as opposed to her horse, and she has control of the horse as what every rider has.
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Endgame
The battle was getting close to the end, Gretchen setting her sights on the man, the horse charging towards him as he revved his chainsaw. He makes sure to try and go for one of the legs but both hands grab him and pull him close to her. She pried away the chainsaw from him and threw it away from them. He pulls out his blunderbuss and she bent her half at an odd angle, he missed his shot and she broke his hand, the loner in pain as he dropped his other weapon.
{“I didn’t want to do that, but you left me no choice stallion.”}
He tries to push away from her but she held him close to her bosom.
“You… And I.”
She said to him, this causing him to be confused by what she meant before a part of the horse’s back began to suck him down into it. He tried to pull up but she helped push him in, he could feel that he was becoming one with it before his mind was interfered with the thought of the creature.
{“Are complete~.”}
___
My thoughts
A simple one here too. I made this one feel more monster girlish other than a tragedy or one character being killed. I guess you can say that this one had a happy ending? I will say this one kinda felt a bit lacking but then again I was trying something knew, like the chasing for example. Compared to the other ones, they all had a character walking and stumbling around things and finding a monster girl. This one I wanted the monster girl to find the loner and in some sense she did in a way and unlike the rest before her, she is currently the only monster girl to live. Oh, and HJSDGCE was the loner if you’re wondering why there was so much detail for him.
To HJSDGCE, I kinda liked this one. Not too dumb, not too great, the perfect balance I will say. Very close to Meanlucario’s rank which is not a bad thing. Gretchen was honestly a new one for me to handle, I’ll own up to that. I thought it’d be best just to make her act like a woman who’s been seeking love but men were just afraid of her to even try to confront her. She took a special interest in you/the loner because no one had ever decided to confront her and try to resist. They all basically ran away and were successful but hey, they’re missing out XD
Sincerely, Dono.
(Grimm nuckelavee).
In a Victorian styled dream where only the sunset prevails and no alteration between day and night happens, a loner walks among the disorganized and filth of the streets where lamp posts flicker.
The loner wore a musketeer hat with a green feather on top, a grey trench coat and a bespoke striped yellow suit with a walnut-brown bartender vest. The pigment of their skin was between a light-brown color and the hair was black. To even add a bit more of character to them-self, they supported having a handlebar moustasche. What they carried with them were just a chainsaw (with a knife switch) and a blunderbuss. They walked cautiously, for they knew that these streets always had some creature lurking around in the darkness of the alleys.
To be even more careful, the loner looked around his surroundings, scanning and paying attention to what possibly could jump out at him. He sees a street sign, the name of the street was Grover Rd. The sign was hanging on its last thread, spinning slowly because of a small wind passing by. The loner had to find a way out of this dream, out of this mysterious realm that copied the one from his reality. It was then that he heard the accompanying sound of hooves walking along the brick road from nearby.
He recognized the sound belonging to a horse but it soon turned out to be more than just a horse… It looked like a person riding a horse but at a closer and more observant look, it looked like the rider and the horse had become one. Like the upper half of the rider was what stuck out of the horse’s back while it searched for something. The loner grew terrified actually from seeing this thing roam around, the question was… Should he respond to fight or flight?
He quickly thought up an answer and decided to fight this thing, it had to be done because he didn’t want to encounter it again. He slowly walked towards its direction, his heart trembling with beats of fear, spine tingling along with other senses, as if it was a bad idea to even try to confront this thing. This creature… Was completely something else entirely, something from a nightmare for sure. The creature spotted him, the horse neighed and rose up, moving its front two legs as the merged rider kept its eyes on him. This was a bad idea.
The horse part began to run full steam, the loner had the two options again: Fight or Flight? He kept towards fight but maybe he could also lead it somewhere to where he would have the advantage… It grew close rather quick and he decided to aim the blunderbuss at it before firing. The horse only flinched and if it were not for the loner acting on his instincts, he would’ve been trampled by the creature if he hadn’t rolled out of the way. The creature turned around as the horse snorts, both seeing him beginning to run away. The horse neighed and began to run after him.
{“Where do you think you’re going?”}
The creature thought as it chased after him, growing even more frustrated. The loner ran into an alley on the right, the horse creature skidding a bit to try and turn without falling over. The loner kept on running, following the paths of the alley, making many turns. This possibly could slow it down and eventually lose him and he’d be free but that was all theory, right now, this was about survival. He kept running but soon went around another corner and waited, hoping it’ll loose him. He listens attentively, listening for the clopping of hooves.
{“Oh where did he go? He hasn’t escaped yet, I know he’s around here, he has to be… Damn these alleyways, it’d do me better without them even being here.”}
The creature reached its long right arm around a corner, feeling for something but there was nothing there other than another wall.
{“All the men I’ve seen who came this way have escaped me before but this one will not be so lucky. Yes, he’ll be my… Stallion. I’ll force him to be mine if it has to be that way.”}
She kept moving along the alleyways, looking around for him. He on the other hand heard the creature coming and began to brace himself for what is to come. Reloading his blunderbuss, he decides to catch it by surprise but something from around the corner grabbed him by the face and quickly pulled him away from his spot. He then sees it was the creature but now to him it looked more feminine now. It certainly had some womanly parts but as both it and the horse looked at him.
{“I finally got hi~~”}
She suddenly was shot by him, letting him go as the horse neighed and rose up. He lands on his arse, quickly getting up and running away to escape. That shot… so close to its face and didn’t even kill. How strong was that thing? Over at the feminine creature, she rubbed her face with both of her hands, the horse stabilizing as she was now furious.
{“That stupid idiot! He wanted to kill me!”}
She thought for a moment before a sinister grin came to her face.
{“Good. I want my stallion to think that he has a winning chance before he realizes the cold truth. Come on.”}
She commanded the horse to pursue the loner, the horse trying its best to hurry and not fall.
Once out of the alleyways, the loner quickly looked around for a place to hide at, though he may be unfortunate.
He couldn’t go the opposite way so he only went forward but something rushed through one of the buildings. Bricks laid out, glass, a bit of infrastructure, and debris of smoke. He had an idea what it could be and took out the chainsaw hybrid, the smile clearing and showing it to be the creature. The horse stomped its right hoof.
“Fin-a~~…lly…”
It began to speak but had a time using verbal communication.
{“Why are you so nervous now? Oh no… He’s hotter than I thought! I-I must have him.”}
He braced himself, the creature getting ready to fight him.
My name is Gretchen, stallion. You will be mine!
Commentary on how she moves, attacks, and defends
Gretchen is not really a combative type. She can attack from a distance and up close but she does not block or parry. She can only move by the horse, other than that she can twist her whole body around to see where the loner has gone off too in order to keep up with him. Her horse can match the speed of the normal horse speed but if she really gets persistent, she can up the horsepower to however she sees is fit.
Excerpt of her battle quotes:
{“Those toys can’t hurt me that much. It’s futile.”}
{“Just be a good boy and let me take you as mine.”}
{“Come on! Just keep trying to get on my bad side!”}
Personality
She is a nightmare (type of enemy) and had ascended her consciousness to a higher plane. She is in her perfected state/form and is ever persistent on what she finds as tasks or goals. She may be mostly quiet but inside she has the heart and strength of a mare who follows her desires. She is more than what she appears to be.
Abilities
Other than being an ascended being who is gifted with an elevated consciousness, her abilities are rather simple. She can force her horse to become fast as she wants it, she is incredibly strong, and can extend her arms. Her upper half is unnaturally flexible as opposed to her horse, and she has control of the horse as what every rider has.
____
Endgame
The battle was getting close to the end, Gretchen setting her sights on the man, the horse charging towards him as he revved his chainsaw. He makes sure to try and go for one of the legs but both hands grab him and pull him close to her. She pried away the chainsaw from him and threw it away from them. He pulls out his blunderbuss and she bent her half at an odd angle, he missed his shot and she broke his hand, the loner in pain as he dropped his other weapon.
{“I didn’t want to do that, but you left me no choice stallion.”}
He tries to push away from her but she held him close to her bosom.
“You… And I.”
She said to him, this causing him to be confused by what she meant before a part of the horse’s back began to suck him down into it. He tried to pull up but she helped push him in, he could feel that he was becoming one with it before his mind was interfered with the thought of the creature.
{“Are complete~.”}
___
My thoughts
A simple one here too. I made this one feel more monster girlish other than a tragedy or one character being killed. I guess you can say that this one had a happy ending? I will say this one kinda felt a bit lacking but then again I was trying something knew, like the chasing for example. Compared to the other ones, they all had a character walking and stumbling around things and finding a monster girl. This one I wanted the monster girl to find the loner and in some sense she did in a way and unlike the rest before her, she is currently the only monster girl to live. Oh, and HJSDGCE was the loner if you’re wondering why there was so much detail for him.
To HJSDGCE, I kinda liked this one. Not too dumb, not too great, the perfect balance I will say. Very close to Meanlucario’s rank which is not a bad thing. Gretchen was honestly a new one for me to handle, I’ll own up to that. I thought it’d be best just to make her act like a woman who’s been seeking love but men were just afraid of her to even try to confront her. She took a special interest in you/the loner because no one had ever decided to confront her and try to resist. They all basically ran away and were successful but hey, they’re missing out XD
Sincerely, Dono.
(Grimm nuckelavee).
Scrabbleman 
[screams in German]
@Dono & M.Storm
Oh that is so cool. And horrifying. But cool! It’s like something out of a nightmare (no pun intended) and scares me in the good way.
I like it. I like it, even though I… Died? Probably? Or like become one with the monster. It’s scary fun.
Oh that is so cool. And horrifying. But cool! It’s like something out of a nightmare (no pun intended) and scares me in the good way.
I like it. I like it, even though I… Died? Probably? Or like become one with the monster. It’s scary fun.
Dono & M.Storm
You have the same b-day as my second cousin.
A purpose.
I turn 27 in 10 days. That said, Happy Birthday
You have the same b-day as my second cousin.
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