MLP:FiM retellings, but in an alternate reality.

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I’m writing such a story that retells the beginning of FiM, but set in another reality from the show. It will have the following elements:
 
-The Multiverse Theory.  
-Two of my OCs I’m creating. Soldier bat-pony stallions who tried to assassinate Celestia over not killing Nightmare Moon 1000 years ago. They get thrown into another dimension by Celestia, but will be back for revenge before Twilight starts her friendship making journey.  
-Slightly different character development for two of the Mane Six.  
-A visit from a future version of one of the Mane Six from the show’s timeline.
 
Feel free to throw in ideas, or link me to similar stories.
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Dream Come True! - Participated in the MLP 9th Anniversary Event
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A Tale For The Ages - Celebrated MLP's 35th Anniversary and FiM's 8th Anniversary
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Zamasu
Here’s what I got so far:
 
“Friendship is Kelvin”  
An MLP:FiM fan reboot.
 
Prologue
 
PRINCESS CELESTIA (voice-over narrating):  
Once upon a time, in the Mystical Land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters, who ruled the kingdom and created harmony for the entire land. To do this, I, Princess Celestia the Elder, used my alicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn. My sister, Princess Luna the Younger, brought out the moon at night. Thus, we have been able to maintain balance for our subjects; consisting of the magical unicorns, the winged pegasi, and the strong earth ponies.
 
But as time went on, Princess Luna became resentful. Many ponies relished and played in the daylight while they slept through her beautiful and serene night. One fateful day, the younger unicorn refused to lower the moon to make way for the dawn. I had tried to reason with her, but the bitterness in the young one’s heart had transformed her into a wicked mare of darkness: Nightmare Moon. She vowed that she would shroud the world in an everlasting night. Reluctantly, I decided to harness the most powerful magic known to all pony kind: the Elements of Harmony. Using this magic, I defeated Nightmare Moon and banished her in the moon. Since then, I have taken responsibility for both sun and moon.
 
But there were other two other ponies who were not happy that I did not take more EXTREME measures to defeat Nightmare Moon. General Romulus and General Remus, two bat-alicorn twin brothers and two of my best soldiers, made it known to me that killing Nightmare Moon was preferable to them. I, however did not share in that belief, for I hold all life sacred, even for those who do evil.
 
Romulus the Elder, big and a headstrong fighter, desired power at any cost. He had a desire to remove me from my throne and pursue world conquest. Remus the Younger, who was smaller and more of a tactician, was more reserved and desired a more republican form of governance for Equestria, but he was submissive to his elder brother’s will. One fateful night, they made an assassination attempt on my life. Before the deed could be done, I sprung into action and tore open a rift in space and time and cast them into another dimension. But little did I know of the revenge they were planning for me and my kingdom…
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