gasmaskangel
@Background Pony #F29F
That honestly sounds very interesting to me, the size difference in particular is right up my alley.
Anyways, sensuality vs. smut. I am by no means an expert however I will say that sensuality very much requires a certain emotional connection between the characters. The subtle glances, seduction, disrobing, the feel of powerful muscle beneath a satin coat, quivering beneath a gentle touch while knowing that the one you’re with is strong and cares for you, giving into that sweet strength and so on.
Ideally you want to be able to give the impression of intimacy without totally giving the game up, this is exactly the place to be sparing on big details and when you must speak in generalities and metaphor.
Example: “I sank into her, melting utterly in her embrace. The mare’s strength leavened with softness as she carried me to the bed and laid me down. Our lips met, the heat of our breath mingling as she fumbled to open my shirt…” and so on.
What I recommend is sliding from sensual into smut, however that can still be classed up a bit, made tender and loving.
Describing the scent, smell, sounds, taste and feel of the characters instead of focusing 100% on penis going into vagina.
Example: “Her cries were the most beautiful music I’d ever heard, her taste a fragrant, bitter tang as my tongue drove her over the edge. She trembled and writhed, one strong hand gripping my head and pulling me closer to her parted, soaking marehood.”
As for the size difference, well that makes for an exciting dance in its own right. I’d write him as being nervous around the much taller and stronger ponies and as he gets closer to the romantic interest(s) have those feeling change to ones of comfort and safety as he learns that they’d never want to hurt him.
That honestly sounds very interesting to me, the size difference in particular is right up my alley.
Anyways, sensuality vs. smut. I am by no means an expert however I will say that sensuality very much requires a certain emotional connection between the characters. The subtle glances, seduction, disrobing, the feel of powerful muscle beneath a satin coat, quivering beneath a gentle touch while knowing that the one you’re with is strong and cares for you, giving into that sweet strength and so on.
Ideally you want to be able to give the impression of intimacy without totally giving the game up, this is exactly the place to be sparing on big details and when you must speak in generalities and metaphor.
Example: “I sank into her, melting utterly in her embrace. The mare’s strength leavened with softness as she carried me to the bed and laid me down. Our lips met, the heat of our breath mingling as she fumbled to open my shirt…” and so on.
What I recommend is sliding from sensual into smut, however that can still be classed up a bit, made tender and loving.
Describing the scent, smell, sounds, taste and feel of the characters instead of focusing 100% on penis going into vagina.
Example: “Her cries were the most beautiful music I’d ever heard, her taste a fragrant, bitter tang as my tongue drove her over the edge. She trembled and writhed, one strong hand gripping my head and pulling me closer to her parted, soaking marehood.”
As for the size difference, well that makes for an exciting dance in its own right. I’d write him as being nervous around the much taller and stronger ponies and as he gets closer to the romantic interest(s) have those feeling change to ones of comfort and safety as he learns that they’d never want to hurt him.