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@Calypso The Zebra Hybrid
Sure. I already updated all of them but this one, which I had a couple suggestions in the first sentence so it scans better. How does this look?
Cosmic is a mare of many talents and is rather quiet about them, but is also rather friendly to everyone she meets. She has the ability to use her magic like unicorns can, due to being a part of a secret order of Pegasi simply known as the Grand Order of The Ancient Pegasi.
If you don’t want that I can just do the other text too (fixed version, of course).
Sure. I already updated all of them but this one, which I had a couple suggestions in the first sentence so it scans better. How does this look?
Cosmic is a mare of many talents and is rather quiet about them, but is also rather friendly to everyone she meets. She has the ability to use her magic like unicorns can, due to being a part of a secret order of Pegasi simply known as the Grand Order of The Ancient Pegasi.
If you don’t want that I can just do the other text too (fixed version, of course).