New but dumb pic, lol
But you pulled it off real nice-like.
I can critique your linework and coloring. Frankly, it's kinda sloppy.
With digital you can easily clean your lines and use rulers or tools to make smooth curves. Might wanna work on creating cleaner lines.
I notice that you sometimes color over the line or you leave corners uncolored. It looks inconsistent. To be fair, it doesn't look noticeable zoomed out. So I was being nitpicky.
That's it, really.
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